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Sep 19, 2008 00:07

[GEN] THREE TEACHERS IN THE ARTtrensaddiction

[Nakajima] Three Teachers in the Art )

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anonymous September 22 2008, 13:32:33 UTC
I love how bold and wrathful Ogata was here, pushing his resentment towards go until he meets Touya-meijin. The little tidbits that led to who he is now and how we recognize him are great. Wonderful job!

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anonymous September 25 2008, 00:58:05 UTC
Lovely look at what lies behind Ogata's go. I like the way the fighting between his parents translates into the value of strategy and winning. And I love Touya Meijin's quiet enjoyment, Ogata's confusion, and how Ogata begins to finally get it at the end. I really enjoyed this.

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sivullinen September 25 2008, 06:47:53 UTC
I think this was perfect! I loved seeing some backstory for Ogata, and his meeting with Touya Kouyo was awesome ♥

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uminohikari September 27 2008, 00:17:43 UTC
Oh, I really like this back story! The beginning feels a lot more polished than the ending (ran out of time? :D), but it was still very well written. I particularly like the descriptions in this fic

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etrangere October 2 2008, 00:03:53 UTC
Fascinating study of Ogata. I like how you feel his background, the build up and his reaction to Touya Kouyo!

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