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[Morikawa]

Sep 19, 2008 00:08

[GEN] AKIRA NO SOCCER
lanerose

( [Morikawa] Akira no Soccer )

sub: lanerose, round 006

Comments 8

anonymous September 20 2008, 13:54:45 UTC

Yay! Soccer fic! And, well-done at that.

[kanazawa]

bookshop September 20 2008, 21:44:54 UTC

Awww, this was so cute. They are adorable, no matter what the game.

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anonymous September 21 2008, 10:28:50 UTC

I would love to see this fleshed out into a longer fic. The premise is fascinating, and the ficbit you have here is tantalising, but leaves me wanting to see everything made into a longer story. I do hope you consider writing more of this!

[katori]

maudite_a_deux September 22 2008, 00:43:30 UTC

Nice idea! I'd like to see more of it too -- it's tantalizing, but just not quite *enough*.

ash_of_mine September 22 2008, 03:06:46 UTC

"Stretch Two Three Four! Stretch Two Three Four! Get those legs loose and limber! Come on, Akira!" Sai said, waving his arms enthusiastically in the air.

*rofl*

The title said it all but it still got me by surprise ^^" Another kind of divinity indeed... and it is nice to see Akira with peers his age!
Nice AU and really original! It is usually Hikaru chasing Akira and joining the Go world but it is really interesting to see the reversal <3

Thanks for this story!! =^o^=