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[Misaki]

Sep 19, 2008 00:11

[GEN] THE SILENCE IN GAMES
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( [Misaki] The silence in games )

Comments 11

uminohikari September 22 2008, 21:05:03 UTC

Ooh, this was a wonderful character study! Apart from a few grammatical mistakes, overall, the writing was really solid :D

anonymous September 24 2008, 15:30:59 UTC

Very nice job getting into Ochi's head. We see him act like a spoiled ingrate to his grandfather in the series, but this does a great job of delving deeper and exploring what his grandfather really meant to him.

[amano]

anonymous September 24 2008, 19:26:45 UTC

That is a really good study on Ochi and his relationship with his grandfather. There were a few moments where the transitions didn't flow as well, but I still enjoyed the overall fic.

[kato]

anonymous September 25 2008, 15:18:50 UTC

Your Ochi is superlative. Such a lonely boy. And yet--he has his interpersonal relationships, too. This fic makes me want to hug him. Nicely done.

[miura]

etrangere September 25 2008, 20:43:41 UTC

Sad and lovely, great portrayal of Ochi and of his relationship with his grandfather.