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[Matsushima]

Sep 19, 2008 00:12

[SMUT] COALESCE
measuringlife

( [Matsushima] Coalesce )

Comments 9

anonymous September 20 2008, 15:51:38 UTC

How much begging would I need to do to get you to write more of this threesome? Because, I'm totally willing. See? ::gets down on knees::

[kanazawa]

anonymous September 20 2008, 19:21:11 UTC

Actually, not much. If life hadn't eaten me whole, I probably would've continued on, and my first thoughts were to continuing on as a ficverse...

~Matsushima

ungalad September 20 2008, 22:13:30 UTC

♥

YAY~! *__* I've wanted to read something like this (whether it was Waya/Isumi/Le Ping or just Waya/Le Ping--it's like twincest~! :D) since like forever, THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT ASLKFJASDKFAJSD THIS IS AWESOME!

usagimc September 21 2008, 00:36:54 UTC

OMG can I chime in on asking for more. (jumps up and down excitedly) I absolutely love this and am dying to see it. ^__^

maudite_a_deux September 22 2008, 00:28:39 UTC

This is a fun threesome, and one I'm surprised I haven't seen before. However, you do have a few problems with tense in places. For example, here you start in present tense and end in past tense:

From games of Go to almost any conceivable task, Le Ping and Waya find a way to turn it into rivalry. If Le Ping got stuck with dishes duty, then Waya would take drying simply to finish twice as fast.

Nicely written smut, though. Yummy, yummy smut.

sivullinen September 22 2008, 06:54:07 UTC

AWESOME THREESOME :D :D :D Thank you for being amazing~~~~~!