[Asabuki] & [Miyashita]

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[SMUT] IN WHICH FANTASY MEETS REALITY AND DOES NOT SURVIVE
chaineddove & umarekawareru

Comments

[sleepingfingers]

Oh, I really loved this. It's amazing. I love Hikaru's voice, his fumbling (and failed) attempts to "woo" Touya. And oh, the sex! So awkwardly them that it's just wonderful. :D

And gawd! Touya Kyouyou and the go analogy of "The Talk"! That's just priceless!

[sivullinen]

Touya Kouyo's speech was HYSTERICAL.

Hikaru had the brief realisation that he probably looked like a git, holding the flowers out like that, but before he had a chance to decide if he wanted to hide them behind his back or just make a bonfire in the backyard with them and run away as fast as possible, the door opened and Touya appeared in the threshold.

Yeah, so is Hikaru.

Hikaru was about to congratulate himself for being some sort of born seduction genius when Touya unexpectedly moved his chair away from Hikaru’s. Bemused, Hikaru moved his chair again and had to completely reconsider the existence of his inner Casanova when Touya moved away yet again.

“What’s wrong, Touya?” he asked, blinking stupidly.

OMG, OMG.

AND THEN I WANTED TO QUOTE EVERY OTHER LINE AS WELL BUT HAD TO STOP. But rest assured I sat here laughing aloud!

Touya gave Hikaru a panicky look, which Hikaru guessed meant that Touya knew what he was doing even less than Hikaru, and so was expecting Hikaru to figure it out, since (Hikaru reminded himself with a

[issen4]

“Father is acting weird. He was explaining about coming into contact with enemy formations today. Do you know if there’s anything wrong with him?”

Was laughing so much at this, and Hikaru and Akira's awkwardness is very endearing. ^^

[anonymous]

Oh, awkward first... love? And broken brains? This was awesome. Truly.

[kanazawa]

[kimby77]

Oh this was wonderful!! One of my new favorite things ever :D :D Just loved the awkwardness and the fumbling and I was giggling the whole time. This is just fabulous. :D <3