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May 05, 2008 00:56

REFLECTIONS FROM A TIN-FOIL MOON

by macey_muse
[wavell] Reflections From a Tin-Foil Moon )

sub: macey_muse, round 005

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anonymous May 5 2008, 13:56:35 UTC
I really, really, really love that title, and the rest of the fic is beautifully lyrical too.

[kozak]

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splintercat May 5 2008, 23:18:16 UTC
That's beautiful. Sad. Really, beautiful. I love your take on this.

(One specific comment: I like that you used the Japanese where you did, though usually that bothers me.)

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sleepingfingers May 6 2008, 04:38:01 UTC
This is beautiful and poignant.

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anonymous May 6 2008, 07:43:23 UTC
what a lovely and bittersweet piece. it's true, akira knows two men who have been deeply affected by sai (three, including himself, four, if you count ogata). he would ask questions.

“So - does this meeting even have a purpose?” Your Go is majestic, but this game has been played so many times -

“Not everything is permitted that luxury.”

these lines were striking.

overall, the mood is one of acceptance... and resignation.

-C. Fairy

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measuringlife May 6 2008, 07:52:40 UTC
What a beautiful, dream-like take on Sai. ♥ The title is especially lovely, and I love the whole surrealness of it all, Sai's focus on the game and Touya's questions, this really is just love~

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