[kozak]

May 05, 2008 00:34

S.A.I.

by aiwritingfic
[kozak] S.A.I. )

sub: aiwritingfic, round 005

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Comments 35

anonymous May 5 2008, 19:04:48 UTC
I can see the themes sprinkled so neatly through this

Your Sai is great, he's just slightly naive and yet so very intelligent.

I'd be very interested to read more in this universe

[beard]

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aiwritingfic May 26 2008, 07:07:31 UTC
*hearts* Thank you for everything, dear.

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thephoenixboy May 26 2008, 13:22:06 UTC
Heh, looks like I have good eyes for the themes.

And thank you

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anonymous May 6 2008, 07:18:28 UTC
now this is a well-executed A.U. the roles of the characters are different, but still very them. it seems deep, like there are more stories you could tell, but this works as a stand-alone.

-C. Fairy

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aiwritingfic May 26 2008, 07:07:46 UTC
*hearts* Thank you, comment fairy!

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anonymous May 6 2008, 11:04:31 UTC
Absolutely brilliant, thank you for making this available to the public!

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aiwritingfic May 26 2008, 07:08:01 UTC
I'm really glad you liked it!

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anonymous May 6 2008, 20:56:59 UTC
Oh my, this is wonderful. I'm not sure how to describe it because it's really unique and the setting / choice of characters (and it is so disturbingly easy to imagine Ogata as a hitman!) are completely unexpected, but you've made it work and, wow, I really am speechless. I adore Yang Hai and I loved how whenever Ogata thinks he's got him, Yang Hai goes and outsmarts him. Also, Sai's thinking function is adorable! I keep thinking of a chibi version of Sai tapping his fan against his chin and it makes me want to squish him. XD

Thank you for writing this, I love this universe and look forward to many more... unconventional fics from you <3 Just perfect.

[greg]

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aiwritingfic May 26 2008, 07:16:42 UTC
*hearts* Thank you so much for telling me which parts you liked, and I have to admit this fic would never have existed if not for the themes, so I don't think I deserve all the credit for the ideas! ♥

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anonymous May 7 2008, 08:42:55 UTC
This is wonderful, an understandable yet rich AU. I sometimes have a hard time understanding or relating to some of the AUs but this one does a good job on both counts.

[marland]

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aiwritingfic May 26 2008, 07:17:19 UTC
Thank you for your comment--I'm glad you found this AU understandable and could relate to it! ♥

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