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May 05, 2008 00:25

MASTERY

by kishmet
[fisher] Mastery )

sub: kishmet, round 005

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uminohikari May 8 2008, 03:27:48 UTC
fjakldfjakl;sdsdafjakdjfka *SPAZZES*

So much adoration and love for you. I adore the parallels between go and sword-fighting, and ohmygod, I love your Waya and your Hikaru.

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anonymous May 11 2008, 04:51:23 UTC
a perfectly imagined and realized a.u. you sharpened certain aspects of the characters to make them fit in this universe - sai's warrior mentality, akira's honor and dignity, hikaru's willingness to just drift along, waya's resentment at being passed so easily, etc. these are the characters we know, but their world is a harsher one, and the stakes are higher than simply losing a go game - the danger is real. the way you parallel key scenes of the manga is also very well-planned, in particular, how hikaru actually allows sai to control his body (he was so scared of that in canon).

i can't wait to see the next installment.

-C. Fairy

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sivullinen May 18 2008, 09:09:26 UTC
Such a well-constructed AU... I giggled, and gasped for breath, and started wondering ^___^

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tininess May 21 2008, 07:01:45 UTC
aaaah!!! hanging >S

Wonderful job of translating HNG elements in this universe!

Moooooar!!!!

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splintercat May 22 2008, 23:00:23 UTC
I'll second everyone's "what! huh!" re: the ending.

I think this is fantastic overall; I hope you consider continuing it. You fit this universe into the canon universe so well and I'm really hoping to see more of it!

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