Very, very nice -- probably the only high school AU I'll enjoy this much. Like the others, I liked the distanced but warm voice, setting the story on the surface and telling the story in spare yet revealing cracks.
Also, the style of this fic reminds me of an entry from a previous blind_go round. I think I might know who it is!
This is a really nice setting! I loved pretty much everything in it; but somehow it leaves me wanting more. Well, it doesn't matter because I had a lot of fun imagining every scene and story described here. Perhaps this is the only way for an author to be satisfied with an AU when the world is so developed - otherwise you would've had to write a novel-length fic. Very nice!
this was really, really good. i like the summary style as other people have mentioned and the illusions to other stories and the fact that you could tell a story though so many people because they were all sort of involved and even as you stereotype them you characterize them, which is awesome in an ironic sort of way.
having just realized that there was a round four, i'm getting to all the fics a bit late...
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Also, the style of this fic reminds me of an entry from a previous blind_go round. I think I might know who it is!
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*loves it, but wants to see moaaaaaaaaaaaar* ... *especially t3h Isumi/Waya, and Kaga/Tsutsui :D :D :D*
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- kato masao
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this was really, really good. i like the summary style as other people have mentioned and the illusions to other stories and the fact that you could tell a story though so many people because they were all sort of involved and even as you stereotype them you characterize them, which is awesome in an ironic sort of way.
having just realized that there was a round four, i'm getting to all the fics a bit late...
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