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May 04, 2007 13:56

TREASON
by epigrammist

[usagi] Treason )

sub: epigrammist, round 003

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qem_chibati May 5 2007, 14:28:22 UTC
Fascinating AU. Have to agree with Hikaru's words at the end.

The parrallels to the world of Hikaru no Go are interesting, and there are also parallels that can be drawn to our world...

I just wanted to say that I found this very thoughtprovoing and interesting.

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anonymous May 5 2007, 20:12:41 UTC
Powerful, violent imagery. Scary how many of the Hikago characters were right and/or fit into this story (especially Mitani and Isumi).

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anonymous May 5 2007, 21:14:09 UTC
Thought provoking fic. I feel like this is only the opening of a much longer work.

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anonymous May 6 2007, 15:40:41 UTC
Fascinating AU. There needs to be more!

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she_universe May 7 2007, 01:11:31 UTC
Oh yes, I have to say that for an AU, this was really brilliant--by which i mean that you didn't throw us all of the information at once, rather you gradually steeped us into the world, carefully with smooth transitions and really well done zooms in & out, so by the end i was hanging onto everything, and marveling and how true your characters remained despite all the obvious adjusting you had to do.

This is such an amazingly deep, clever AU that i kind of can't help but agree with all of the above comments and hope that post blind_go this might blossom into a slight bigger 'verse of sorts. Even though this fic stands so well, the amount of stuff and different sorts of perspectives and types of writing brought in--really amazing--i can't help but be greedy and want to see much much more of this fascinating stuff. And tons of the lines? Oh so clever in general. Like the end. And the middle. And the beginning.

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