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Dec 29, 2006 13:27

FIVE OF FIVE: NEVER LET YOU GO
by chaineddove

( [Masao] Five of Five: Never Let You Go )

Comments 17

qem_chibati January 2 2007, 04:49:49 UTC

I really loved reading this story. The way that the story progresses yet each piece can be taken as complete made it really enjoyable to follow.

It was a real pleasure to be able to read this!

chaineddove January 15 2007, 21:00:05 UTC

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing all the way through ^_^. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, lumbering and inelegant as the progression of it sometimes was *lol*

missitar January 5 2007, 05:44:34 UTC

. . . I'm trying to figure out whether these fit together continuously or not! Part of me is sure that yes, they probably do, but that second story sticks out like a sore thumb, because of the time jump and place change and sudden break between the two characters that isn't referenced before or since.--Agreeing with a previous commenter that each story can stand alone, though, and that gives me the luxurious option of picking out my favorites and dwelling in them. Thanks for submitting all five of these, I enjoyed them a lot.

A note from the author missitar January 5 2007, 09:34:14 UTC

Finally! Someone has realized these are not meant to be a linear progression! Thank you. I have all sorts of things to say about this "story" once the names are revealed, but that's what has been bothering me the most. I cannot imagine denial-Akira of Two and desperately-in-love-Akira of One in the same timeline! Obviously they're meant to be different ^.~

This is a story of five possibilities, five places the same people could end up on the same day in history, depending on past actions and reactions. Awesome of you to realize this is so! Just had to thank you, and now i'm back to anonymity-land...

Re: A note from the author ungalad January 6 2007, 05:04:21 UTC

Wow! ^^ well you wrote wonderful pieces, this is quite nice... I wish I could draw, I would make a fanart of Akira the way Hikaru sees him in this fic... But no fanart is needed, cuz you write pretty damn well :D. I'm sooo gonna stalk your fics when I find out who you are (meaning when the results are out, cos I'm completely clueless u_u). Thanks a lot for sharing!

Re: A note from the author chaineddove January 15 2007, 21:00:53 UTC

Awww, thanks *lol* Your reviews made me extremely happy. I'm so glad you liked these, and feel free to stalk away!

mousapelli January 6 2007, 05:43:08 UTC

This was really nice, thoughtful and gradual. I love that Touya has something to offer Shindou, and that Shindou is finally starting to really move on.

chaineddove January 15 2007, 21:02:12 UTC

Thanks a lot for that ^_^. The entire time I was working on this, I kept trying for gradual and feeling like it was running away with me instead ^^; I'm glad it didn't come out completely fragmented. Thanks for reading!

I like the reality anonymous January 9 2007, 21:01:46 UTC

Where Hikaru and Akira share quiet moments, their rivalry, their love and above all their spoken and unspoken secrets. You did a wonderful job writing this series of fics. Awesome. Mind you I only reviewed the ones I liked best. Alas I have no idea who you are. But this is a great piece of writing. Thanks for sharing. *^_^*

redcrest March 28 2012, 07:54:43 UTC

Gorgeous. You really captured the weight and depth of, well... LIFE. The dulling of grief with time, the faded memories of such happiness, the beauty of true love, the comfort and priceless joy of having one's true love and partner beside you... UGH. How did a shounen sports/game manga become so life-touchingly profound? I love it. And your fics are awesome--thank you so much!