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[anonymous]

Do I love a scrumptiously put together little drabble... I love imagining that Shindou was looking at possibly buying himself a brothel in Shinjuku (It's an income-generating property!), and of course, Touya's sense of triumph in the last two sentences comes with a lot of baggage, more than sixty-six words should be able to carry.

(Yes, I counted, ha)

Great job!!

Jeremy

[anonymous]

Waya has never seen Shindou's mother in action indeed. *cough* So Touya has? :D

Nicely done!

[anonymous]

Aww, poor Hikaru. You KNOW he's all "Mom, cut it out, jeez. MOM!" and all embarrassed about it, especially with Touya there. There's a surprising amount of detail here for a drabble. Nicely done.

Vanessa

[anonymous]

Hee, very true! Shindou can be such a spoiled brat.

- Perry

[anonymous]

You definitely have a good point here. Nicely told.

Suzy