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[Ginger]

Jul 24, 2013 01:04

by zenelly

( Geodesic )

sub: zenelly, mini-round 004: summer heat!

Comments 18

anonymous July 25 2013, 02:50:17 UTC

This was great!

zenelly July 31 2013, 13:14:26 UTC

Thank you very much!

anonymous July 25 2013, 03:01:59 UTC

Wow, this is damned good.

I love the atmosphere of the fic, humid, with a highly intimate camera lens. I love how everything develops like it's inevitible. I also really love Akira's pov here.

I tip my hat to you!!

Jeremy

zenelly July 31 2013, 13:22:23 UTC

Oh my gosh, thank you so much! I'm glad that the feeling of inevitability came through. Thank you so much!

anonymous July 25 2013, 20:55:49 UTC

Jeremy said it! The sense of atmosphere is great! Love the sniping at the end too.

Django

zenelly July 31 2013, 13:21:30 UTC

I can't have them be in a situation without Hikaru and Akira trying to needle each other. It just feels weird if they don't. ^^ Thank you so so much!

anonymous July 27 2013, 07:44:05 UTC

Wow, this is absolutely lovely!!

zenelly July 31 2013, 13:20:52 UTC

Thank you so much!!!

anonymous July 28 2013, 18:21:11 UTC

This is probably my favorite fic of the round, honestly. Beautifully written.

Vanessa

zenelly July 31 2013, 13:19:57 UTC

Oh man, seriously?? Wow, thank you so so much, I'm incredibly flattered, holy cow.