While I find Touya's characterization pretty good here, Shindou's seems to come a little out of left field for my liking. I like the overall, but for me, Shindou is brash and headstrong, but not quite so giggly.
Yeah, I thought the deadline was later than it was, so I ended up writing this with less than two hours left while trying to do three other things as well. As I was writing it, I was saying it was horrible. I just wanted to make the deadline. Shindou is only giggly here because he's plastered, though.
Poor, poor, poor Touya. Be gentle on him, Shindou, I'm pretty sure virgins have a higher chance of being traumatized when dropped straight into bondage.
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And Touya's hair is totally green *Nods Sagely*
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I wonder in what spirit did Akari fill that bag. Did she mean to help, or to make fun of them?
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I'm of the opinion that Akari reads too many Yaoi manga. XD
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