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anonymous May 5 2011, 12:10:43 UTC
To connect the distant past with the distant future - he knows now that this is their part in that endless chain, and he is the luckiest man in the world.

Together with Hikaru, they really did create a universe all their own.

I love how this connects the whole fic back to the manga again. Very well done!

Also:
Hikaru sighs. “What the hell am I going to tell Touya?”

“That idiots get what they deserve?”

Hee! *hearts*

-kami-zumo

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lanerose May 5 2011, 14:14:46 UTC
This was beautiful. There were so many little moments that I liked that I can't really pick just one. I was momentarily disconcerted to see fem!Hikaru, but that's what you get with lack of summary in blind_go, so nothing to be done about that. Seriously, thank you for sharing! =)

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anonymous May 7 2011, 09:41:10 UTC
I usually hate het AUs but this really made me laugh. Hikaru works pretty well as a girl. :)

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anonymous May 20 2011, 03:46:53 UTC
Love love LOVE Touya with Sai. *dies of cute* And genderswap is always interesting, and this is adorable and heartbreaking and just totally awesome.

onigokko

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lacygrey May 21 2011, 18:09:07 UTC
She blurts out, “Holy shit, I’m a Touya now,”

This line is really funny. I often think that making Hikaru a girl would show just how outspoken girls aren't supposed to be.

And their rushing into sex: it so often happens with these two in fic, with their hotheadedness and passion and them being 'destined for one another' and 'eternal rivals': they tend to skip the safe sex. Here the stakes are different though, which is why your title is so apt.

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