I enjoyed this a lot - and I really liked the whole backstory with Hikaru's dad. That seems a tragically realistic take on Japanese expectations surrounding settling down and getting a family. Good job!
The beginning seemed a bit disconnected with the rest of the fic, and it's hard to me to think of them drinking tequila... but the rest of it is good--and the insights into Japanese marriages, and I enjoyed the backstory with Hikaru's dad and his friend. Good work!
"disconnected" is precisely the overall feeling i was going for, so even though i know what you mean, i still can't really see that as a negative. as far as the drinking goes, that's just personal preference. ^_~ glad that you liked it despite that, though.
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thank you! *blushes!* glad you liked it, and the backstory. ^__^
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thank you!
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"disconnected" is precisely the overall feeling i was going for, so even though i know what you mean, i still can't really see that as a negative. as far as the drinking goes, that's just personal preference. ^_~ glad that you liked it despite that, though.
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what's not said is so often very critical. ^_~ thank you so much!! glad you liked. ^_^
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