"revelation"-A Star Trek fanfiction

[ansley15]

“Revelation”
Fandom: Star Trek
Pairing: Kirk/Spock/Uhura (with a brief mention of another polyamorous relationship,TOS!Kirk/TOS!Spock, and implied pre-McCoy/Chapel.)
Summary: 5 people a member of the triad came out to who didn't understand, and one who did. Unconditionally.

Comments

[ansley15]

Oh, and I can't believe I forgot. Thanks to ariadnechan for being super sweet and helping me figure out my LJ tech difficulties. It wouldn't be up without her:)

[linstock]

You handled this very well. I really liked the way you showed the complexity of this relationship revealing their love and commitment through a lens of the difficulties, prejudices and judgement they face. You also make this hot without being overly explicit…” to strip to fold amongst them …watch them writhe in escatic beauty”… proving sometimes less can be more.
Spock Prime's pain was palpable in his conversation with Spock… “He was the only one I have ever l-” the word choked. Broke. Still too sacred to say.“ I particularly like the link between Winona’s revelation [LOVED her pragmatic attitude to complex relationships] and Pike’s conversation with Kirk.
The final touching conversation with Galia was great. Nyota’s many layered tensions and the initial awkwardness… and then the relief of finding that total acceptance. We need more Gailas!

[ansley15]

Thank you for commenting! I appreciate it that you take the time to formulate such detailed responses:) Winona/George/Pike is this weird kink of mine I can't really explain, so I'm glad it worked for you.

I, too, think if everyone in the world was a bit like Gaila (in more ways than one)there would be much more joy in the universe. She's a great role model:)

[dineru]

This was really interesting! I liked the range of opinions that you showed. Gaila and Uhura's conversation was the best, of course. :) I really appreciate complex relationships where not everything is perfect (at least in other people's opinions, here), and you wrote about that aspect very well!

[ansley15]

Thanks! I appreciate your imput. I like loving, but complicated/realistic relationship-fics myself, and it's always nice to find someone who shares my kink:)

[dineru]

I am a giant sucker for complicated relationships (as long as it doesn't end in tragedy)! :)

[anonymous]

I love this!! thank you so so so much for writing this. I am glad I helped prompt you. I particularly loved the scene with Jim and his mom as well as Spock with Spock Prime. To me, I love the dynamic of the OT3. I love Jim and Nyota's bickering dynamic, I love Spock's quiet certainty with Nyota and I cannot imagine Jim and Spock without each other(the intensity of their bond is amazing). Can't wait to see more of this verse!

Also, you should check out the writing of winterscreek(I think) for a great take on this dynamic.

[ansley15]

Aww, yay! It's the original prompter! I'm glad you enjoyed it even though it kinda morphed from what it was originally. Thanks for commenting:)

I will definitely check this person out. Thanks for the rec!

[ansley15]

Hmmm...I seem to be having a hard time finding winterscreek. Link, por favor? If you can't find it, don't sweat it:)

[silvr_dagger]

This is a wonderful follow-up to your previous fic, and I absolutely loved how you brought in the reactions from so many different people, and how professionally Kirk, Spock and Uhura handled all of it. You have a fine eye for emotional detail and description, and it's great to find K/S/U fic in general, much less something this well written.

[ansley15]

Aww, thanks for commenting! I know K/S/U is a kinda controversial pairing (or "threeing...") so I was a little hesitant to write so many one-shots about them. I'm glad you stuck with the verse:)