fic: pillars of salt and pillars of sand (heroes)

[anr]

five times peter and claire challenge response

STATUS: Complete
SUMMARY: ... saved the world.
RATING: PG
CLASSIFICATIONS: Peter/Claire
ARCHIVING: Do not archive. Please ask.
NOTES: This story implies incest. If that bothers you, turn away now. Also? Rough and unbeta'd. Sorry.
FOR: havocthecat
WORDS: 994
DISCLAIMER: Not mine. Don't sue.
Copyright anr; April 2009

Comments

[paynesgrey]

Very nice. I really enjoy your pacing and writing style. Great job.

[anr]

Thanks again! I'm really pleased you enjoyed the story so! :)

Great icon! Hee!

[wuhdemah]

Amazing! Beautifully written and very evocative. <3 Great job.

[anr]

Thank you so much! I'm really pleased you liked it so. :)

[frellingblonde]

VERY nice job. I've been so glad to see an upswing in Paire fics since the most recent episode and this is my favorite so far.

[anr]

Aww, thank you! That's lovely feedback to receive. :)

[urbanpurple]

Oh i LOVED this, this is the Peter and Claire i love, s1 Paire.
The dialogue is so canon, it really fits them both.
And them returning at her old high school? That was a very nice touch. It reminded me of early s1, wich i loved.
And all the little cute moments between them, the small touches...*squeeee*
Great job on this! <3

[anr]

Thank you!! Again, such lovely feedback! The highschool scene is one I have thought about since the very first episodes of the series, so I'm glad you thought it worked so well. :)

[golden_scarlett]

Really enjoyed this, your style is so that as a reader I felt like I was spying on their intimate moments (which I loved!). I really hope you keep writing Paire, I love the sparseness and eloquence of your writing :)

[anr]

Thank you!! I really appreciate your feedback, and the fact that you've enjoyed the story and my writing so. :)