You are my sweetest downfall

[anoukinparis]

Title: The Fall **Chapter Three**
Author: anoukinparis
Pairings: YooSu/JaeMin/JaeHo
Genre: AU (Vampires) /Drama/Romance/Angst
Rating: PG-13/R
Summary: Attempting to end his life, the last thing a troubled Yoochun expects is someone to actually lend out a helping hand to him. Especially a human by the name of Junsu. And so begins the fall. (hmm, I like

Comments

[lahmacun]

i'm confused.

what IS changmin? o____O is he a vampire or smth? LOL. srsly, i don't get it. i'm too stupid.

but i love it! and i wanna know what junsu's drawing looks like~ and his brother's birthday? isn't this junho? and if it's him, why's his b-day not the same day as Junsu? xD lol

anyways! good job, angel <3 LOVE IT!

[anoukinparis]

awe xD
Yes, Changmin's a vampire. He was just being sarcastic with Jae, who was surprised that he was there in the first place. He didn't mean ghost literally. Maybe that clears it up..?

And yeah, I realized that might be confusing, so I'll probably edit it a little better. In this fic, he wasn't going to have a twin brother. Just to make things a little easier...^^'

Anyways, I hope all this helps? Perhaps? I feel bad that it was confusing~ >>

But thank you for commenting! I appreciate it~
<3

[tumi18]

so yoosu met again... and yes more emo!chun xD

LOL jae's reaction <333
hmm.. i wonder how jaemin met.. *curious*

[anoukinparis]

hahaha emo!chun~ And then there's Su. xD
-snugglesJae-
And you'll just have to see~ ^_~

Thank you for commenting!
<3

[crazyoverbishie]

ill leave a spot first...i need to sleep rite now...despite my needs to read your fic...but my mom is asking me to sleep... >.

[anoukinparis]

aishhh
sleep~!

<3

[crazyoverbishie]

YES SIR!!!
*salute*

[c_h_i_b_i]

Just, wow. XD I shall continue on letting you know about my pathetic addiction to your writing style. The way you use words just leaves me gripping the keyboard as I drink it all in, wanting more after each pharagraph. It's truly wonderful, the interaction between characters, the way you describe their thoughts, their actions and the background. God, I only wish I'll be able to write like this someday ^^
Loved every bit of it, looking forward to reading more.
<333

[anoukinparis]

^///^ I really don't know what to say. Your comment left me speechless, it was so wonderful and sweet. Writing is my passion, so to hear compliments like that about my style...ahh, just thank you so, so much. <3 I can't believe anyone would say they wished to write like me. -blush-

I'm really glad that you've enjoyed the story so far. ^__^ Hope to get the next chapter up soon!

Thanks again, dear~~
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[straw_kiwi]

Finally school is over, now i can relaxingly indulge myself in your fic >.<...

As always, your fic shows the most captivating emotions of the characters....

"The wind was just strong enough, whipping the white buttoned shirt to his skin, hair dancing like black flames. Moments like this, small, nearly insignificant moments, somehow made up for so much else. Moments where he raised his hands, watching the pallor of his skin leak into the air, slipping fast into the ever changing currents. Darkening.

Simply melting into the wind."

I can imagine Chunnie as a dark vampire prince waiting for his destined princess (Junsu) to come by his side. But i love how no matter how much he tried to forget, the image of Junsu always lingered in his mind...just admit it Chunnie, you're in LOVE, a love at first sight that your mind denied but your heart is yearning for it

can't wait for more, i missed Max's sarcasm toward Chunnie lolz...and also missing Jaeho *-*

[anoukinparis]

Wow, school is just now over for you? *.* I'm going to start going to a university in less than two weeks, lol

Ah, your comments always make me feel so happy. ^__^ And that's interesting that you pulled that paragraph and called him a prince, because when I wrote that I was imagining that same sort of thing. xD hehe~ I don't if Chunnie will admit that anytime soon. ^^

We all love Min's sarcasm, don't we? ^o^ I'll try to get the next one up soon! Thank you for reading and commenting~~

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