We can fall together...

[anoukinparis]

Title: You do this to me
Author: anoukinparis
Pairing: JaeHo <3
Genre: RomanticSmut? Does that maybe work?
Rating: PG-13/R
Summary: I had always imagined what it would feel like, to be kissed by you. I imagined you would kiss beautifully. Imagined even the tips of my fingers feeling the ache behind it.

A/N: First time ever posting JaeHo having sex dear

Comments

[holystardown]

oh chrism!
that was.... beautiful! like beyond words!
it's so intence and romantic and yet still smut!
<3
sorry for a stupid comment... :]
PeAcE

[anoukinparis]

Awee, it wasn't stupid.
It made me really happy to know you enjoyed it~ ^^
Ahh, thank you so, so much for commenting~ You're too sweet x3

<3

[rangikucharlize]

this is so much love <333
I like the beginning where you said that they could only be together if they becaem selfish~ I thought that was spot on and very thoughtful :)
I love the style of this- its very descriptive o the emotions and thoughts so there's no mistake on how Jae feels...
I may be biased cause I' a huge YunJae shipper, but I love this very very much :)
<3

[anoukinparis]

ahhh~ <333
If you're biased, then I am incredibly so as well for even writing stories like this. ^^
Your comments always make me so, so happy. You manage to capture everything I want readers to take out of my stories, and you're just too sweet. ^__^
Thank you very much~ Let us bask in our YunJae love~~

<33

[rangikucharlize]

ahaha, I should actually get to finishing the five or so YunJae fics I've got going on...~ lmao
If I'm sweet you're everything else :) I love all your stories-
lol, *basking in the YunJae love* =D
<33333

[xfineapple]

beautiful. it was so pure it didn't look like they are having great smex! lol.(not that this sucked) this really is beautiful.

[anoukinparis]

xD I understand what you mean. And because it was on the pure side I didn't want it to be...well, crazy mind-blowing, lol
Especially for their first time ^_~
But thank you for commenting~ I do appreciate it~~

<3

[straw_kiwi]

*nosebleed* *nosebleed* (must concentrate for finals) *nosebleed* *nosebleed*

INDESCRIBABLE that's all i can say
The way you write run smoothly like water traveling down the stream that makes you want to watch it flow all the way to the end...it's like once you set your eyes to it, you can't help but continue following it...

"Muffled groans spill across the side of my neck, echoing in my ears when you begin to move. Every last sound that releases from your throat echoes inside of me. You’ve never been more intoxicating. No matter how many times I rip at the sheets, searching for something to hold onto, to keep an ounce of sanity left inside of me, it all falls to nothing."

this paragraphe right here got my hypnotize, extracting my soul from my body into Jaeho's world and witness their whole love-life fantasy.

[anoukinparis]

Awee!! -hands lots of tissues- Please concentrate on your finals! I hate knowing all these distract you from studying! ;__; -is a dork-
But that being said, thank you soooo much for commenting, once again. I always smile when I read them, they make me so happy. <33 ^^
And...I rather like that paragraph too. ^o^ There's just something so addicting with them..

Thank you, thank you~~
<333

[straw_kiwi]

Don't worry, aside from addicting to your fic...i also study (cramps at last mins lolz) but plz do write more >.< more Jaeho plz...

[anoukinparis]

hehe~ I'll keeping writing if you study. ^^ aishh, I feel like Changmin...studying is most important! xP

[jakiwumi]

ooohhhh so sexy.... my JJ sounded so sexy as ever....
i can imagin JJ doing that in real life...
Damn my imagination has gone wild again :P haha
thanks ^_^

[anoukinparis]

xDD
Isn't Jae always sexy? Even when he's acting like a complete dork or making a mistake, he manages it so wonderfully ^__^
hehe~ I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D
Thank you for commenting~~
<3

(and I wanna imagine he HAS done that in real life...^^)