Those Smiles

Dec 12, 2009 06:09

Title: Those Smiles
Author: anoukinparis
Pairing: Joon/Seungho
Genre: Romance/Drabble (178 words)
Rating: PG
Summary: I'm above the stars, drowning, something.

(From Joon's POV)

Those smiles~ )

drabble, anoukinparis, romance, mblaq

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beatinlove December 12 2009, 15:06:53 UTC
*DIES*
so beautiful~
i love your mblaq fic, never stop writing bb ♥

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anoukinparis January 5 2010, 06:04:24 UTC
ahsjhdshjd truly speechless bb D: thank you so, so much ♥

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crazy_otaku911 December 12 2009, 15:12:12 UTC
*diesdiesdies* That was gorgeous~

And Seungho's smiles are awesome. And Joon just sounds so friggin' cute!

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anoukinparis January 5 2010, 06:05:56 UTC
;~; thank you so much, bb!

when seungho smiles i literally go blank lmao. i could watch it all day x)

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spunspider December 12 2009, 15:26:42 UTC
Adorable sweetness. Maybe the beginning could be a bit tighter, anchored to something if you know what I mean? The ending comes together perfectly though, it's lovely. &hearts

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anoukinparis January 5 2010, 06:09:51 UTC
ahh i do know what you mean, actually. =) i'm never fully satisfied with my fics lmao, and now i wish i could go back and rework this a little.

thank you for the constructive criticism - i really appreciate hearing what people honestly think of my writing ^^

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okami_kaoru December 12 2009, 15:33:13 UTC
Okay, I think I'm being a bad stalker for a while and I should at last introduce myself to you. xd

Hi thaar. *waves* I've been reading your journal for quite some time and I've always been too shy or whatsoever to comment here. But THIS *points at the story* gave me lacking motivation.

You're one of my favourite fanfiction-writers nowadays, you know? You have a great style, beautiful choose of words, great talent. Until I've found your journal I haven't been reading fanfiction for a long, long time - but your stories are just too good, they're like a drug, they keep you unsatisfied and wanting for more.

So... Write more! Seungho/Joon is just way to go! I'll always cheer for you from now on! ♥

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anoukinparis January 5 2010, 06:21:45 UTC
aish late comment is late, sorry bb D:

-takes deep breath-

that has be, quite honestly, the most touching comment i've received in a very long time. it always makes me ridiculously happy when people like my fics, comment on my style, etc. but saying that i'm one of your favorite writers...just..thank you omg ;~; ♥ lmao i'm afraid i'm my own worst critic, so i really do appreciate you taking the time to say what you did and shaking off the stalker status ;)

asjahsakjshsd i don't even know what else to say but more thank yous! :') and feel free to comment on here any time, bb -hugs-

p.s. more seungho/joon is definitely in the future!

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okami_kaoru January 5 2010, 22:44:22 UTC
No problem, bb, I'm patient. ^^;

I'm glad my comment made you happy - but to tell the truth you simply deserved it. And as for me, when I finally start to praise something then it must be good, believe me. :3

You can be sure to recieve more comments from me from now on! ♥

Oh, and I'm Joanna. Nice to meet you, too~

btw, may I add you as a friend? It would be easier for me to follow your future updates. :3

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anoukinparis January 16 2010, 22:53:49 UTC
well, thank you again ^^ i've been working on something special as of late, which is why i haven't been posting on here as often as i usually do, but that will change soon! so i'm looking forward to your comments, and i hope my future writings will live up to your praise :D'

and of course, bb! ♥ -skips off to friend you-

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hypnotic_joon December 12 2009, 16:03:07 UTC
OMG! I LOVE IT!
*____*
It's so cuute!!! >/////<'
I love the way you write! Keep it up, bb!♥

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anoukinparis January 5 2010, 06:24:06 UTC
you're seriously too sweet, bb ahjshajhdsh ;~;

glad you enjoyed! and i most definitely will keep it up! :D

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