Comments | anoukinparis: Even MORE YunJae lovin~ 8D

anoukinparis

Even MORE YunJae lovin~ 8D

May 07, 2009 01:08

Title: With the Sun (Chp 5/Part 2)
Author: anoukinparis
Pairing: YunJae/YooSu (minor)
Genre: Drama/Romance/Angst
Rating: PG-13/R
Summary: Just before a horrible accident, Junsu and Yoochun decided to adopt a little girl. Now she is left in Jaejoong's care, who tries to deal with the loss of his friends, the arrival of someone else in his life, and the ( Read more... )

with the sun, drama, yunjae, romance

Comments 36

moon1084 May 7 2009, 07:14:55 UTC

first spot?? back to comment

moon1084 May 7 2009, 07:29:09 UTC

gaah i loved jae's pov out of this. i too was worried that yunho might look at it as a one night stand. dont worry jae yunnie wants much much more. great chap! min is soo funny with taking care of Ae Cha.

and the ending...

"As Ae Cha bounded after Yunho down the hallway, still curious, Jaejoong merely grinned. Piping in with an airy, “You should ask Yuyu who won the game~”"

LMAO!!!

anoukinparis May 8 2009, 05:16:36 UTC

ahhh thank you so much!! ^__^ i'm glad you liked min too~ lmao

thanks for commenting, love <333

kattan69 May 7 2009, 07:29:12 UTC

Hahaha...so what game were they playing in the first place..*giving a cheeky grin*...care to explain to Ae Cha.

Oh well, it is about time those two had a go at each other...make that many more. After all they have years of catching up...if they count that as well.

anoukinparis May 11 2009, 02:17:13 UTC

Hmm..hopefully you can figure that one out~ xD lol

thanks so much for commenting!
<3

redlolli May 7 2009, 13:07:30 UTC

aww~ finally they're together <3
And Ae Cha is soooo cute!
Hope they're going to be happy from now on
Or are there still difficulties for them?

Hope you update soon! <3

anoukinparis May 11 2009, 02:21:11 UTC

Yes!!! Finally! :D I don't want to give anything away, but they're definitely going to be happier~ after all, they're finally admitting their feelings!

Awe, and glad you like Ae Cha! Thanks for reading, love~ <3

rshauna May 7 2009, 13:29:41 UTC

not sure of i have commented before but anyway I really liked this chapter. They are finally together!! <3

the last sentence. haha

anoukinparis May 11 2009, 02:22:27 UTC

:DDD
I'm happy that you liked it! And...I couldn't really help myself with that last part~ xD

Thanks! <3

chaosmyth May 7 2009, 14:08:39 UTC

AHSDAHSDFASDFASDFASHDF FINALLY *____________________*♥

I was looking forward to reading this chapter, and I'm glad to say it didn't disappoint at all *o*

The smut scene was awesome ;_;♥ I love how you managed to make it so steamy and hot and frantic and desperate without even being too explicit x3

If this was how it was going to be from now on - Yunho's fingers sinking into his thighs, gripping as if he was afraid to let go - thrusts that broke him, rocked him hard on the bed until he couldn't distinguish the sound of the springs from the pants - if this was how it could be between them - bruised lips, searching, finding each other - sweet, slick embrace - fucking three years of fear away, aching, stupid, senseless fear - then Jaejoong didn't want anything else but more.
ahjdgasdgashdgahsdgahsdgajsgdjagdjhgdgas *_________*♥

The contrast with the peacefulness of the "morning" after is great, too X3

“Ah?” Changmin laughed. “And what's Yunho good at?”

“Yuyu's good at making him smile.”awwwwww ( ... )

anoukinparis May 11 2009, 02:30:16 UTC

ajdshkasjdhjasdjshd YOU ;___; we haven't talked in forever why. and you still leave me the most amazing comments ever, in case I haven't mentioned that about fifty times already~

First, I was totally going to preface the smut by saying "I hope this doesn't disappoint anyone!" so that comment was pretty spot on amazing xD Thank youuuu~

And ajshashdhsdhs YOU MENTIONED THE PIERCING. :D I thought it was really intimate too, so don't worry~ xD I'm glad I wasn't crazy for thinking it!

So basically I love you and thanks for reading 8D
<333