Title: With the Sun (Chp 5/Part 2)
Author: anoukinparis
Pairing: YunJae/YooSu (minor)
Genre: Drama/Romance/Angst
Rating: PG-13/R
Summary: Just before a horrible accident, Junsu and Yoochun decided to adopt a little girl. Now she is left in Jaejoong's care, who tries to deal with the loss of his friends, the arrival of someone else in his life, and the
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and the ending...
"As Ae Cha bounded after Yunho down the hallway, still curious, Jaejoong merely grinned. Piping in with an airy, “You should ask Yuyu who won the game~”"
LMAO!!!
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thanks for commenting, love <333
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Oh well, it is about time those two had a go at each other...make that many more. After all they have years of catching up...if they count that as well.
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thanks so much for commenting!
<3
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And Ae Cha is soooo cute!
Hope they're going to be happy from now on
Or are there still difficulties for them?
Hope you update soon! <3
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Awe, and glad you like Ae Cha! Thanks for reading, love~ <3
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the last sentence. haha
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I'm happy that you liked it! And...I couldn't really help myself with that last part~ xD
Thanks! <3
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I was looking forward to reading this chapter, and I'm glad to say it didn't disappoint at all *o*
The smut scene was awesome ;_;♥ I love how you managed to make it so steamy and hot and frantic and desperate without even being too explicit x3
If this was how it was going to be from now on - Yunho's fingers sinking into his thighs, gripping as if he was afraid to let go - thrusts that broke him, rocked him hard on the bed until he couldn't distinguish the sound of the springs from the pants - if this was how it could be between them - bruised lips, searching, finding each other - sweet, slick embrace - fucking three years of fear away, aching, stupid, senseless fear - then Jaejoong didn't want anything else but more.
ahjdgasdgashdgahsdgahsdgajsgdjagdjhgdgas *_________*♥
The contrast with the peacefulness of the "morning" after is great, too X3
“Ah?” Changmin laughed. “And what's Yunho good at?”
“Yuyu's good at making him smile.”awwwwww ( ... )
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First, I was totally going to preface the smut by saying "I hope this doesn't disappoint anyone!" so that comment was pretty spot on amazing xD Thank youuuu~
And ajshashdhsdhs YOU MENTIONED THE PIERCING. :D I thought it was really intimate too, so don't worry~ xD I'm glad I wasn't crazy for thinking it!
So basically I love you and thanks for reading 8D
<333
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