Real

[anoukinparis]

Title: Real
Author: anoukinparis
Pairing: Yunjae
Genre: Angst/Romance/Drama
Summary: Well, the gorgeous day doesn't know anything. It doesn't know that I'm breaking while you're walking away with your coat still slung across your arm, hair tossed in that annoyingly, impeccably casual way you always work so hard on.

A/N: Another one-shot I want to

Comments

[lovelykitten8]

WOW i was not expecting the letter to say that so yunho has some one else so sad :(

[anoukinparis]

-cough- actually, they both do ^^; it is sad though
thanks for reading~

<3

[straw_kiwi]

*hug* your my morning wake up call *hug*

even though i go ga ga for all the yunjae fluffiness
i just love your angst fic, it adds so much meanings and emotions to it
not to mention the angsty *nosebleed smut nosebleed*, it seem so real
the feelings of wanting to resist but instead succumb under such desires
though he said it's just a fantasy, but they both know this is much more real than anything else *-*

I held you and the sheets, the three of us tangled into one. Foreheads pressed together softly. I liked your hair better this way, disheveled and free-falling across your face, and for a moment I made myself believe I was the only one who ever saw you like this.

don't you wish you were there to witness that scene >.<

[anoukinparis]

-huggles- :D yay!

i'm glad you like my angst cause i can't seem to get out of writing angsty stories xD; i wanna write something more...crack next time, lmao
but thank you so much ^///^

...and yes. *___* yes i do.

<3

[redlolli]

I love it <333
But I don't know if I should hate Yunho or cry with him ._.
Well I think I hate him because he has someone else and hurt my Jonngie Q__Q

But it's still beautiful x3
I like how you write ^^

[anoukinparis]

ahhh that's kinda the reaction i was hoping for, actually ^^ they're really both at fault~

ajshjahsha thank you so much for reading, bb ^o^ so many compliments~

<3

[dzertva_x]

I was all feeling sad for Yunho.
And then I read the ending.

Poor Jaejoong :c Yunho, drop whoever else you have and just be with your true love ;;

[anoukinparis]

ah, yes, the ending did kinda twist things, didn't it? ^^;
they'll always be together in some way~

thank you for reading, love~
<3

[shinchul303]

Nice concept, beautifully executed. Surprising turnabout at the end. It would seem Jae really wants it to be real, but isn't dumb and knows better. I have to fault Yunho here, even though Jae obviously has something else going as well.

You know, this COULD be an absolutely perfect prologue for a serious chaptered fic.

*Hint Hint*

[anoukinparis]

ajshjahdjahdkjs cannot. handle. all the compliments ^///^ but i have to say, you understand it all perfectly. i'm glad you caught that jae isn't completely innocent in this either~

ahhh it COULD be, lmao. but i'm struggling enough with having regular updates for with the sun D: homework really kills my inspiration sometimes

thanks for reading, bb~
<3

[shinchul303]

Love your stuff.