One beautiful kaleidescope

[anoukinparis]

Title: With the Sun (Chp 2)
Author: anoukinparis
Pairing: YunJae/YooSu (minor)
Genre: Drama/Romance
Rating: PG-13/R
Summary: Love has a way of doing lots of strange things. Love made Yoochun and Junsu adopt a baby girl. Love made Jae take her in after the terrible accident. But most importantly, love pulled Yunho into his life again.

A/N: thank you to

Comments

[straw_kiwi]

ahhh my stupid laptop O_o it took forever to load the comment box...

the part where jae remembered about the past was so painful to read...feels like it's tearing him apart slowly, deeply inside

i wondered what happened to yunjae in the passed that causes jae to snapped when yunnie called him "Jaejoongie"

"Yuyu, cute nick name..." *pinch*

plz update soon

[anoukinparis]

ahhh that part was very hard to write as well ;___; i admit i cried quite a bit, lol
and as for the jaejoongie bit, their past will be revealed more in later chapters~ ^^

yuyuah! <3

i'll try my best~~

[jinsane226]

Nope, sleeping doesn't change a thing Jaejoong...like drinking it just delays or pushes aside reality for a few short moments. ;_; *hugs JJ*

[anoukinparis]

-hugs JJ with you- <3
and now he'll be able to face reality with yunho by his side~
thanks for reading bb
<3

[shinchul303]

"...and Jaejoong cried for the first time that entire day because it hurt even worse not to."

I must say you've got the angst down really well.

The long Jaejoong wake-up call was a work of art in itself. Yunho is like a god here; doing what has to be done. Such a good man; hurting just as much as Jae is, but still going forward, because someone HAS to.

This is a great fic.

[anoukinparis]

^___^
thank you, thank you~ this chapter was definitely a labor of love, especially the beginning. and yes, yunho is a very good man. ;__; a very, very good man~ <3

i'm glad you're liking it so far! ^^

[mearii87]

...this is beautiful. I know you don't know me...I have an intense case of fic lurkerism (that I'm desperately trying to overcome,) although this is the first time I've read something of yours. I intend to go back and read your past stories.

I don't comment unless I really, really, really, love a piece. And this is spectacular. I look forward to more, you're writing is positively beautiful. :) :)

[anoukinparis]

I don't, but it's nice to meet you! ^^ (ahh and don't worry, i have a severe case of it as well, i truly am an awful fic reader xD)
-blushblush- i'd be so happy if you did, but just reading this comment alone makes me happy already! ^o^ really, thank you so much~~~
anyone calling your writing beautiful is pretty wonderful xD

i'll try and update soon! <3

[rangikucharlize]

omigosh how did I miss the first chapter bb????!!!!!
I can't imagine what it much be like to lose suh important peope and then end up the guardian of their child. I think you've got the characters spot on with Jae the way he is and Yun trying to take lead :) I love the way the little girl is bringing them together in such a beautiful way also. I just love your writing, gawd!
<333333333
update soon?
btw I love all your icons XD

[anoukinparis]

asjdhajkdhjahs -hugs!-
ahh, i was so excited to see that you commented! xD thank you so much~ as hard as the yoosu was to write, their deaths and taking care of their girl really do help yunjae realize how much they need each other...which is..pretty much what you just said, but anyways, you understand exactly what i'm trying to get across so yay! xD
lmao and thanks! 8D but that min icon...god *___* -makes grabbyhands-

i'll update as soon as i can! ^^
<33333

[rangikucharlize]

*CLINGS* I MISS YOU ;____________;
ahaha I just want to say it again: the way they're brought together is sadly beautiful <333 love love love you XD aha
I dont even remember who made my icon...it's credited though, lmao! hes so sexy in it, I couldn't resist!
take your time! <33333