Ahhh~! YunJae~!

[anoukinparis]

Title: Simple, isn't it?
Author: anoukinparis
Pairing: YunJae/JaeHo
Genre: Angst/Romace (what else? ^^;)
Rating: PG-13?
Summary: You almost always talk during it. Sometimes your voice is muffled by the pillow case. Sometimes unsteady, thick, choking out just a few words only to release into a low moan. Sometimes rushed, and you never actually say it.

Comments

[dapdaphae]

omg you make me wibble and I missed your writing so much, Sarah ;____;

The fourth set in this really gripped me. I don't know, like.. the reality of it, the consequences that could happen because of what they felt for each other just.. gah. The way words fail Yunho in expressing how he feels.. it so bittersweet because you can feel the (almost)desperate desire of his to give Jaejoong what he wanted and so much more. I love fics that showcase Ho's vulnerabilty, idk. He's so much more than the stoic leader that everyone sees, much more than the aegyo-filled persona that Jaejoong and the other members describe him to be. And I think you nailed his thoughts in this situation quite perfectly.

Please believe me, Jaejoong. I want it. It's true. Everything, your bad jokes and your fingers and your hidden grins and your vulnerability, I want it all.

It hurts so good.

♥

[anoukinparis]

;____;
Ahhh...I was really touched when I read just your first comment! And now I'm just as bad as Yunho, and I don't know what quite to say other than hell, I've missed you too~

You just have a way of understanding everything I'm trying to get across in my fics (which I'm sure I've mentioned before), and it's wonderful. I'm always in love with your comments. And I completely agree with you about Yunho, he's much more than the stoic leader. Personally, I've always seen him as someone who cares almost too much. That was probably what made the fourth set so easy for me to write, letting all those conflicting emotions take over...

Aish, I ramble too much. But ah well.

ilu <3

Re: aka directed me here :)

[anoukinparis]

hey yourself~ <3

thank you so much for the comment, love! and oh no! i hope there won't be any more near death experiences D: -scurries to write more-

^_~

[saoirseangel]

Oh my...my heart! That was just so...perfectly lovely and completely beautiful. It just read so real, felt so real that I actually had to pause while reading it. It felt like them, or at least how I sometimes think they can be. I'm not very good at reviewing lol, but I loved it.

Amazing work! ^^

[anoukinparis]

Awee, don't doubt your reviewing skills! xD All your compliments made me blush and flail a bit and I'm just so, so happy you liked it!

Thank you so much~ ^^

<333

[imie_schweetzel]

i love your leader-sshi in here. not so sure of his acts, full of fear, yet brave as he always is. ♥

i need more yunjae fics like dz. ♥

[anoukinparis]

Your icon...*__* -wants-

And oh, it makes me so happy that you appreciate the way I write our lovely Yunho~ Thank you so, so much!

And I shall work on it! 8D

[chloe1910]

hey girl..I missed you..i love this..totally heartwarming...

[anoukinparis]

ahhh~ I've missed you too, love~ <3

Thank you for commenting, it always puts a smile on my face! ^^