Lifeline

[anothersquirrel]

Title: Lifeline
Rating: PG13/T
Verse: G1
Characters/Pairings: ProwlxJazz
Warnings: Canon typical violence, Minor Character Death
Words: 4,776
Prompts: The pilot just died, if you want to live - run, hide and seek, first light, savior, must keep quiet, and chances are slim
Summary: Life often takes twists and turns that Prowl's plans can't account

Comments

[fianna9]

great job on this story. Prowl is going to have somebody's head for this screw up. I love how they kept saving each other.

[anothersquirrel]

Thanks. Yeah, neither of them are at all happy about this screw up.

[kkcliffy]

This is one of my favorites, now. The hysterical laughter was a nice touch and totally how I think they might react to those realizations. Great story!

[anothersquirrel]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.

[zea_taylor]

Great job. This was a fun story - I like the way you kept it moving at such a healthy clip, and slipped the prompts in smoothly as you went. Right from the opening scene where Prowl was trying to analyse his surroundings, the way you wrote both Jazz and Prowl rang true, and the tension of their situation was very obvious.

I was kept intrigued, reading through to the end, and enjoyed the satisfaction of the final scene - again in character for both, but touchingly affectionate. Thanks for sharing!

[anothersquirrel]

Thank you, this was a fun write. I'm happy that it kept you interested up to the end.

[silberstreif]

Great job. :) I loved the dynamic between Prowl and Jazz and how very in character they both seemed to be.

[anothersquirrel]

Thank you :)

[renegadewriter8]

Oh Jazz, you really need to plan your rescue missions better hehehe This was an awesome fic! Great job ^^

[anothersquirrel]

Jazz needed an actual plan that consisted of more than just stealing a shuttle and crashing it into the other one to rescue Prowl.

Thanks :)