& I'm off to bed

[anothersquirrel]

Title: Fishtailing (2/13)
Verse: G1 AU
Rating: PG-13/T
Characters: Prowl, Jazz, Barricade, Backbite, Sideswipe, and Grapple
Warnings: none
Summary: Fishtailing: when the driver of the car loses control and the end swerves side to side; like their lives that spun out of control, and they were just along for the ride.
Notes: This whole chapter ended up way

Comments

Heyas

[kida_bridger]

Awesome chapter. Love the idea of multi-layer tracks. Keep up the good work :)

Re: Heyas

[anothersquirrel]

Thank you

[pjlover666]

The background story is amazing! I love all the descriptions of the racing tracks! Plus I really like how you took extra notice of their hover forms and the wheel/earth forms of their alt mode :)
And Jazz has no idea that he and Prowl have a shared past! Epp! I can't wait for a new chapter on this! ^^

[anothersquirrel]

Thanks, and yeah, Jazz has no clue about what was really going on before.

[camfield]

Hmmm. Barricade = Prowl? I must say I'm intrigued...

I love your descriptions of the tracks and the races, made me all excited inside!

[anothersquirrel]

I had fun coming up with things about the tracks and how they would be different from Earth. :)

[prowlsgirl]

Hmmm I wonder if Barricade was Prowl's racing name so no one knew he was doing it back then.

[anothersquirrel]

Not quite, but close.

[fianna9]

I'm liking what your doing with this so far, especially Grapple and the paperwork. Details like that are fun to read. looking forward to more.

[anothersquirrel]

Thanks, I'm glad that you like Grapple in this, I wasn't quite sure I had him right.