I think I ruined a childhood favorite...

[anothersquirrel]

Title: Gingerbread Man
Prompt: Week 2 - #1: Can’t hide from love.
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Prowl, Jazz, mentions of others
Verse: Bayverse (only '07 movie though)
Warnings: bit of slash, mentions of death and dying, mentions of torture
Summary: No one can hide forever, but if you run long enough the chase ends.
Notes: For the prowlxjazz anniversary challenge

Comments

[usagi_atemu_tom]

So sad, yet very well written, especially with keeping in the dark until the very end who was the one running and who the one trying to catch him. It's just sad that this one has no happy ending where Jazz would have stopped running the way we wanted it. Instead, he died fighting Megatron and now poor Prowl is all alone.
A great idea though, even if I personally am not familiar with ‘The Gingerbread Man’. ^^

[anothersquirrel]

Jazz is simply too stubborn to do anything the way we would want it. Thank you.

[zea_taylor]

That was lovely. It took me a little while to get used to the unattributed dialogue, but I think it suited the flow and rhythm of this story very well - not to mention making it easier to keep us guessing. The bittersweet ending was spot on, and so sad... *might need tissues now*

[anothersquirrel]

Thank you, but if you don't mind me asking, was it because you're not used to just reading the dialogue, or because the dialogue was choppy?

[fianna9]

Poor Prowl, always having his love run away from him until it's too late. Wonderfully, beautifully sad story.

[anothersquirrel]

Thank you for reading.

[cmdrtekk]

A sad piece despite the light humor found in many of the scenes. But very well written.

[anothersquirrel]

Thanks

[sideslip_tf]

I was not expecting that. (Good job for surprising me - I enjoy that.)

Nice story although it was sad. I don't think Jazz would have thought it was worth it...

[anothersquirrel]

No, he probably wouldn't. I'm glad you enjoyed this.