Offer

[anothersquirrel]

Title: Offer
Rating: PG 13
Verse: G1 AU
Characters: Prowl, Jazz, mention of others
Prompt: Week 4 - #7: Decepticon Jazz seduces Prowl, & #8: Watching you, watching me
Warnings: Hinted slash
Summary: In watching the other, a realization is reached and an offer is made.
Notes: For the prowlxjazz anniversary challenge. This was kind of rushed, so it probably has a few

Comments

[darkeyes_17]

What a twisted web it's become! Great plot, great twist, and really great writing.

[anothersquirrel]

Thank you

[gracesolo]

Ack!! Twisty ending is twisted... PLEASE please please, on bended knee begging, is there more in this story-verse???

Great job all the way around, and you really kept me guessing at what was truly going on right to the very end!! And Crafty Prowl is very crafty, and Jazz really doesn't know as much about what is going on as he likes to think he does, does he?

Please keep up the awesome work, I would melt into grateful goo if you continued this.... ;)

[anothersquirrel]

No, Jazz really doesn't know what's actually going on.

I've written this that kind falls in with this verse, but not completely. If you meant if I was going to write more of this verse, I don't really know, as much as I love the concept the bunny is rather elusive and tempermental.

[zea_taylor]

You weave together a fascinating picture of these mechs. It's always been somewhat alarming that, almost by definition, the faction leaders are surrounded by mechs who are so much brighter and more devious than they are. It's easy to see them being profoundly discontent and having agendas of their own.

Great writing, and a wonderful glimpse into this web of complex loyalties. Thanks fror sharing.

[anothersquirrel]

It is rather amazing that both leaders maintain control over their factions despite that there seem to be mechs that are more than capable of replacing them and doing a better job than they are. The only way it works in my mind is that mechs that are close to Optimus and Megatron don't have the presence to actually lead the troops. Starscream is the best example of this too, with his constant betraying of Megatron, but being unable to actually get the others to side with him.

Thank you.

[synaltern]

Did you just show up out of nowhere, or was I just not paying attention? Probably the latter, knowing me.

This is amazing. The ending - gah! Twists like that are fantastic to not see coming. Keep it up!

[anothersquirrel]

I've been around, but this is the most I've posted in the last year lol

Thanks

[fianna9]

Wow. Prowl plotting with Soundwave. Tangled alliances on all fronts. You've really got me curious as to who else is involved and how. Wonderfully done.

[anothersquirrel]

There was actually a hint about who else is involved. Thank you