Another PxJ Challenge Response

[anothersquirrel]

Title: Pretend
Prompt: Week 3 #1- Movie Night
Rating: PG
Characters: Prowl, Jazz, mention of others
Verse: G1
Words: 728
Summary: It was a perfect opportunity to forget reality.
Notes: For the prowlxjazz anniversary challenge.

Comments

[fianna9]

Wow, I really like it. Poor Jazz and poor Prowl, both wanting something but too afraid to ask. Hopefully, one of them will take the risk one day.

[anothersquirrel]

Yeah, hopefully they will. Thanks for pointing out that mistake, it's fixed. :)

[darkeyes_17]

*facepalms* Communication, mechs, and maybe you both can get what you want.

That was the 'jackal' side of me talking, but here's the other side.

What a moving and intricate little fic. I'm glad you gave so much gravity to it.

[anothersquirrel]

Communication is the key to everything, unfortunately, they don't realize that the other's trying to say something. I'm glad you liked it.

[synaltern]

So much <3 for this one. Simple not-so-sweet...sweetness. >.> I liked the emphasis on how the different species perceive time.

[anothersquirrel]

Thank you

[ex_naggingf]

Awww! I hope they get the courage up to talk to each other someday. I like the concept of Cybertronian movies being so long...but it makes sense since their species is so long lived. A 2 hour movie would probably seem like a 1/2 hour show is to us.

Had to use my floating squirrel icon in honor of your user name ^_^

[anothersquirrel]

Hopefully they will.

Also, I love your squirrel icon lol

[renegadewriter8]

*cries* Poor both of them! *smacks them both on the helm* Realize that you both love each other! XD

Great job!

[anothersquirrel]

Thanks.