Alice in Wonderland/PotC crossover oneshot

[anonymous_plume]

So, I writed a crossover. This is not only my first foray into those but also into PotC fic. As such, this is the first time I've played with Jack, which was surprisingly challenging, and this would not nearly be as fun if not for the excellent, excellent!!!, insightful feedback from the ridiculously glorious mundungus42 and a wonderful, prompt and thorough

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[mundungus42]

*dances a happy happy dance* This is AWESOME! I especially love the Sartrean overtones of the opening with Jack and Tarrant that Alice proceeds to completely turn around. And really, to have one's imaginary friend-cum-champion AND the most charmingly jingly pirate of all sounds a lot less like a hellish waste and an awful lot like a dream come true. Wonderfully sassy Alice found just the right time to ask! :D

[anonymous_plume]

*dances with you!* Thank you and thank you!

Alice has the BEST of both worlds (the desert aside) and I almost hate her with jealousy. My God, though. The fun they could have. guh.

[penniless1]

Oh heavens to Betsy I think I broke a vein in my nose.

This is serious one-handed wonder work I tell you. Guh..just..Jack and Tarrant and Alice and...GUH!

And if Will and Elizabeth and Mirana...BUGUH!

*hauls up skirts to dance with wicked glee*

[anonymous_plume]

Your nose?! :O

That Jack is one smooth operator! (So, he was okay you think?)

The um, potc_bigbang fic I'm going to write will have MUCH more jack/tarrant/aliceness whoamg.

Now, this Will+Elizabeth+Mirana. Go on. *waggles eyebrows*

*twirls with you*

[just_a_dram]

Hehehe...I am wickedly giggling. This is marvelous, my dear. If you were concerned about your Jack voice, you shouldn't be. Perfection, I'd say!

I started out thinking I would quote some of the lines that seemed so very Jack, but then it turned out that they were all so very Jack. I liked their slap fight. Hehe...no, this endlessly amused me.

And Alice: I. Am. Jealous. Just sayin'.

[anonymous_plume]

Yes??? Yaaayayayay! You know what's such fun? Bickering Jack + Tarrant! Two peas in a forced pod and such UST potential! *drool*

I'm so glad you think so. I was/am totally nervous about that. He was surprisingly challenging and I didn't want to do him an injustice. That would be criminal.

Slap fight!!!! sqquuueeee!

Oh, Alice. You filthy, filthy strumpet.

p.s. your icon made me go cross-eyed. i have to save that image in my icon file, kthx. x_x

[geekmama]

The um, potc_bigbang fic I'm going to write will have MUCH more jack/tarrant/aliceness whoamg.

Oooh, I am bouncing with glee to hear this! Again, this was a wonderful crossover, the characterizations are perfection!

[anonymous_plume]

*ssqquueeee!!* Thank you! :D

[clay_roses]

Oh, my. Alice is such a lucky....

*ahem*

Nope, not over it. *Beyond* jealous of Alice in this situation. You know, except for the whole being in the Locker thing. I could do without that part. :)

This was wonderful and wittily done. A pure joy to read. I really hope you do continue on in this vein for the PotC Big Bang!

[anonymous_plume]

baha! I would never have even thought to write them in the Locker if it weren't for the prompt. ;)

Thank you so much! :O I'm so glad you liked it. I very much am continuing in this vein, only, it'll be way hotter. (hopefully.) (and also not in the Locker.) :D