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[anonfeedback]

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[daeseol]

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[swabluu]

dan oppa's writing is always...really cute omg i don't know how else to describe it!

[daeseol]

omg bluu hahahaha thank you ^0^

[daeseol]

I WORSHIP YOU

WHERE TO FIND KYUNGMYEON FICS

DAESEOL.KYUNGMYEONFUCKING.COM

ok -being all serious-
i think your characters can be fullllly developed and your writing better if you can write longer fics. i feel that longer fics will def improve your writing.

[daeseol]

omg lol i am no worthy of any worship. :3 anyway, i actually noticed most of my fics are drabbles and really short oneshots with approximately more or less a thousand words. i'm currently trying to write longer fics. i hope i'll do better this time. thank you for telling me that! :)

[daeseol]

first off, i want to commend you for writing so much kyungmyeon <3 they're an unappreciated ship and while not one of my faves, you really characterize them nicely.

however, i think you sometimes fall victim to awkward language and an exclusion of necessary commas, as well as prose that can be a bit too flowery and takes away from the impact the fic. i really think you'd benefit from a beta, especially because your problems really aren't too dire. you have a lot of potential!

//recedes into wall because i suck at giving feedback orz

[daeseol]

hi! sobs thank you very much! personally i think it's a really wonderful otp or maybe it's just me being biased.

and...yes. i actually notice that whenever i reread my fics. i think it's because i am still learning how to play with words + english is not a native language? i guess i should be careful with choice of words and sentence construction. and thanks for suggesting that i get the help of a beta. i think i really do need one. or two. second opinions are good.

i really appreciate this concrit, anon! :) thank you very much.