Re: Hold your colour 3/3delicateflower8May 31 2012, 23:40:21 UTC
Yay! I love it! So excited for more! I'd love you forever if you could manage to squeeze a little Tommy Joe Ratliff into the plot somehow, but if he doesn't fit in with your plan, I understand that too, and it'll still be super awesome, I'm sure. :) Can't wait to see what you come up with!
Re: Hold your colour TWO: neon green con.creepyliciousJune 1 2012, 23:55:05 UTC
They break up for an hour to stroll around and while he's waiting for her by the car a vibrant green shirt catches his eye. The guy packing them up looks up, most likely because he feels Adam staring
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Re: Hold your colour TWO: neon green con.creepyliciousJune 1 2012, 23:57:48 UTC
~+~ Emilie is laughing at him. He knows it, but he doesn't care. He's grinning like a mad person. He has a brand new shirt and it has colour.
“And it only cost you a kiss,” she says.
“I got it for free. The kiss was...a thank you,” Adam answers. He's maybe still in awe a bit here, but who can blame him? It's not like there was much kissing happening in the camp.
“Right. So, you think we should find those Letos?”
“The car makes funny noises,” Adam answers. They can't afford to get stranded in the desert.
“We don't have much money left,” she says.
“We'll manage,” he replies, because what else is there to do? “Besides Bilvy said the shirt would get us a foot in the door.”
“I think it's a good thing you're pretty,” she answers.
“You're gorgeous,” he says.
“Shut up. You don't even like girls.”
“I like them okay. I just don't wanna have sex with them.”
She smiles and keeps quiet.
AN: This is getting ridiculously long...I might start to post links to my journal.
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Glad you like it.
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Have another chapter (I'm planing on five more)
Two: Neon green~1 ( ... )
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Emilie is laughing at him. He knows it, but he doesn't care. He's grinning like a mad person. He has a brand new shirt and it has colour.
“And it only cost you a kiss,” she says.
“I got it for free. The kiss was...a thank you,” Adam answers. He's maybe still in awe a bit here, but who can blame him? It's not like there was much kissing happening in the camp.
“Right. So, you think we should find those Letos?”
“The car makes funny noises,” Adam answers. They can't afford to get stranded in the desert.
“We don't have much money left,” she says.
“We'll manage,” he replies, because what else is there to do? “Besides Bilvy said the shirt would get us a foot in the door.”
“I think it's a good thing you're pretty,” she answers.
“You're gorgeous,” he says.
“Shut up. You don't even like girls.”
“I like them okay. I just don't wanna have sex with them.”
She smiles and keeps quiet.
AN: This is getting ridiculously long...I might start to post links to my journal.
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