avatar | the one where the fire nation clearly loses

[miarr]

Avatar: The Last Airbender | Sokka/Zuko | 4700 words | beta'd by lemiru and kokanshu.

Originally written for the Avatar Kink Meme, although it's long past its time. Prompt was Zuko/Sokka, season 1 capturefic, Sokka still tops. Thanks to lemiru and kokanshu for the on-the-spot betas.

The One Where the Fire Nation Clearly Loses

Comments

[stereosymbiosis]

Oh man, this was great. Hot and hilarious all at once! I loved Sokka's points system, and how he's calm until he realizes he doesn't have his boomerang, and how he tells Zuko he's the Plan guy...that was wonderful. Great job!

[miarr]

Thanks very much! :D You basically listed all my favorite parts of the fic, so I'm glad it wasn't only me who saw it that way. I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reading!

[esprix]

GUH. Seriously. GUH. And thanks. :)

[miarr]

Haha, you're very welcome! And thanks for reading. ♥

[dustyjack]

Plus 1,000,000 points for this fic.

[opal_skies]

I must second this perfectly phrased comment! ;)

[miarr]

Hee, thank you! I'm getting such a kick out of this, seriously. *g* Sokka and point systems go very naturally together, I think-although it might just be the anal-retentive in me. ;D

[miarr]

Dude, talk about perfectly-phrased-this comment totally made my day. FIVE BILLION POINTS FOR BEING TRES COOL. This could turn into a drinking game or something. :D

Thanks for reading and whatnot-I'm really glad you enjoyed!

[ruebroadway]

LMAO!! I think my favorite part was the revelation that Zuko sneezes fire. Hilarious, really. And that part where Sokka couldn't take off his belt...classic...

[miarr]

Thank you very much! I was really torn about the sneezing fire bit, because it took the edge of whole 15-year-old-OMG-extreme-urgency, but I loved it too much to let it go in the end. And yeah, fumbling and/or awkward manhandling are always fun in my book. Those boys are all about hilarity and (very endearing, low-grade) fail to me. XD I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and thanks again! ♥

[shes_unreal]

Hysterical! Similar to my own co-written capturefic (but aren't they all?) but way, way, way funnier.

[miarr]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. ♥ And yeah, there's no much space of manoeuvring in these sort of prompt fics. But then, we all love the occasional foregone conclusion, don't we? That's what kink fics are all about, I think. XD Viva la memes!

[1angelette]

Ten thousand points for the icon.