Comments | anniespinkhouse: Big Bang 2013: Have Hatred and Gravity Won

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Big Bang 2013: Have Hatred and Gravity Won - 2/19

Jul 18, 2013 16:09

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au, age play, nc-17, slavery, underage, j2, prostitution, have hatred and gravity won

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anonymous July 19 2013, 08:26:54 UTC

"Jensen's split-second decision to direct his talk-back at him, as a way to test the kid’s loyalty. Now, he was in the wrong place, by the wrong person",
Oh Jensen! now what is he going to do

"Oh, for god’s’ sake. “G’night, Jared,” Jensen buried his head into the pillow and let himself imagine all the painful things he could do to Jared Padalecki. " hehehe

“Okay, how about, if you win, you get to kiss me and if I win, I get to kiss you, and that’s it. It’s just a kiss.”
hahaha what????

now that Jared doesn't have a tutor, Jensen can teach him...

:( mmm I can't believe is passed 3:00 am

anniespinkhouse July 19 2013, 11:57:58 UTC

lol - but just what is he going to teach Jared ;)

maguie July 19 2013, 23:26:09 UTC

lol so all my comments yesterday are on "anonymous"

anniespinkhouse July 20 2013, 12:08:21 UTC

Now I know who needed strong coffee in the morning! LJ has peculiarities.

jolieblon July 19 2013, 21:29:41 UTC

What a great story you are unfolding for us! Loving those little glimpses of Jensen's life before joining JD, and especially intrigued by the knowledge that he has the wherewithal to walk away at any time and live a very good life. Very interested to understand all the reasons he has for taking this job.

hannahbellejude August 1 2013, 18:14:26 UTC

For Big Bangs I usually try to hold my feedback till the end. I almost left a comment when Fin was killed (?! :( ?!) but I managed to resist. For this though I just couldn't keep my mouth shut.

“That’s the same thing. I still get to kiss you,” he finally remarked.

“Oh, no baby boy, it's not the same thing at all.” Jensen growled, and it sent a tingle down Jared’s spine that curled his toes.

and then

“You do have a very kissable mouth. Are you going to let me show you how the grown-ups play?”

AND THEN THE ACTUAL KISSING!!! So fucking awesome. I have to go re-read this portion before I can move on.

(I'm also really enjoying the entire premise but I'm going to save that for my comment at the end!) <3

anniespinkhouse August 2 2013, 14:19:55 UTC

Yay for making you happy - boo that it broke your routine. J2 kissing has to be one of my favorite things, so I may have spent way too long visualising this scene to write it lol.

jj1564 August 10 2013, 11:49:52 UTC

I love slave fics and usually prefer bottom Jensen stories but I really like the dynamic here. It's refreshing that although Jensen is the slave, he's the one with the upper hand in their relationship. However, 'baby boy' Jared is pretty unpredictable so I think this is going to be interesting!

anniespinkhouse August 11 2013, 17:32:11 UTC

I've been biting my nails here and relieved to see you continued. I hate giving sexual position unless I'm asked in pm because I like my characters to be defined by much more than that - Jensen's character is definitely the more toppy of the two - and he's not about to bend over for teenager - even if he is his master lol

jj1564 August 12 2013, 09:22:18 UTC

I'm pleased I didn't know who the top was or I may not have read it and now I have a lovely new kink! Yaay TopJensen!

anniespinkhouse August 12 2013, 21:04:01 UTC

Woohoo - I converted you. You now have so many more delicious fics to choose from.

kanecrazy October 17 2013, 21:38:58 UTC

There are just some sentences that paint perfect pictures and "Jensen’s grin was pure filth and promise." is one of them. That kiss is one of the sexiest I've ever seen written. Well done!