I am awful and the break is logical (you will see) BUT I can say that the final chapter has now been drafted and I just have the epilogue to write. I want this out of the way well before Christmas, to focus on family, so I will be posting reasonably quickly :)
CHRIS, YOU SON OF A BITCH, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE? I'm so angry with him that I can't even... JENSEEEEEEEEEN!
I love this story so much... I know I've been quiet and I'm really, really sorry. I read the chapter and I'm always wanting to come back and post, but RL always gets in its way. Forgive me, please?
Evil clifhanger, but not more evil than the 28th one. That one with Jensen saying he lied to Jared) almost killed me, hahaha. But it was all good because it lead to one of the hottest scene of the fic. :P
You are totally forgiven, RL has to come first (ish)Thanks so much for dropping by and saying nice things now. Poor Chris thought he was riding to the rescue but he should have taken time to find out. I don't mean to make cliffhangers...really...*runs away*
Yeah, Chris should have... On the other hand because of this I'm more found of Jared's mother and Jake now. I just hope that Morgan isn't torturing Jensen or something. But knowing you, he probably is... *sniffles*
“Don’t give up on me, Child. Whatever transpires, don’t give up.” Nearly made me tear up there. “My son is gone but I am very fond of Prince Jensen’s lover. I think... we may see each other again.” “How do I even know he is alive?” “I am certain, it was foretold.” Yup, tears here. Great chapter!
Re-reading this I am struck by how wonderfully you handled the dialogue -- first between Sophia and Jared and then between Christian and Jared. Really deftly done. Also, the tension throughout is palpable. But will he see the his mother again, I wonder? Hmm ...
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*on my knees waiting for next part*
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I love this story so much... I know I've been quiet and I'm really, really sorry. I read the chapter and I'm always wanting to come back and post, but RL always gets in its way. Forgive me, please?
Evil clifhanger, but not more evil than the 28th one. That one with Jensen saying he lied to Jared) almost killed me, hahaha. But it was all good because it lead to one of the hottest scene of the fic. :P
Go, Jared! Go to save Jensen!
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Poor Chris thought he was riding to the rescue but he should have taken time to find out. I don't mean to make cliffhangers...really...*runs away*
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Yeah, Chris should have... On the other hand because of this I'm more found of Jared's mother and Jake now. I just hope that Morgan isn't torturing Jensen or something. But knowing you, he probably is... *sniffles*
Can't wait for the next part! ♥
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“My son is gone but I am very fond of Prince Jensen’s lover. I think... we may see each other again.” “How do I even know he is alive?” “I am certain, it was foretold.” Yup, tears here.
Great chapter!
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But will he see the his mother again, I wonder? Hmm ...
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