Comments | annieroo2: FIC - Ameliorate ~Rangiku/Shuuhei ~PG13

annieroo2

FIC - Ameliorate ~Rangiku/Shuuhei ~PG13

Mar 06, 2009 23:26

Title: Ameliorate
Characters: Matsumoto Rangiku, Hisagi Shuuhei, mentions of Gin and Kira
Pairings: ShuuRan, GinRan, GinKira
Spoilers: none
Warnings: Implied unhealthy sexual relationship between Gin and Kira
Rating: PG13 for language, sexual implications
Word Count: 4015 including omake
Prompt: Tenth Division
Written for: week #47 ( Read more... )

rangiku, gin, kira, shuuhei, contest-entry, bleach, fanfic

Comments 32

bloodthirstylt March 7 2009, 16:37:35 UTC

I absolutely loved this. *hugs*

annieroo2 March 9 2009, 17:38:57 UTC

*hugs back* Oh thanks so much for reading. It's always nice to know when you liked one of my stories. :D

bitter_tea March 7 2009, 18:58:46 UTC

This is how a love my ShuuRan, with a little dose of angsty, one-sided GinRan and a sweetly earnest Shuuhei. Awesome.

annieroo2 March 9 2009, 17:57:53 UTC

*laughs* Well it's my first attempt at them, so I'm very grateful that you liked it.

Funnily enough this is how I like them too! :D

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to tell me what you liked. :D

anat_astarte March 8 2009, 05:24:17 UTC

Wow, this is really fantastic! Loved this! <3

annieroo2 March 9 2009, 18:04:28 UTC

*blushes* This is my first ShuuRan, so I'm really happy you liked it so much.

I really appreciating you reading and taking the extra time to leave a comment! :D

enggrrl March 8 2009, 13:08:35 UTC

I've never really thought about ShuuRan, but it was very sweet, I liked this Shuuhei.

annieroo2 March 9 2009, 19:05:26 UTC

Awww! Thank you! I'm happy I could get you to read a different pairing.

Kubo drew a series of omake sketches where Shuuhei has crush on Rangiku. I just took that idea and tried to run with it.

I really appreciate you reading my stories and taking the time to comment. I know how busy you are way over there in Japan. :D

I'm a little hungover, but here goes... yawns_widely March 8 2009, 15:27:26 UTC

You did well to expand on this piece, as the extra touches really make it, such as Rangiku enjoying being played, and more time spent on her perception of Shuuhei, which gives the scene more meat, and the reader a better understanding of where Matsumoto is coming from ( ... )

Re: I'm a little hungover, but here goes... annieroo2 March 9 2009, 19:14:32 UTC

*laughs* Trying to kill off more brain cells are you ( ... )