FIC - Three's Company ~Ishida/Orihime, Renji ~NC17

[annieroo2]

Title: Three’s Company
Pairings/Characters: Ishida Uryuu/ Inoue Orihime, Abarai Renji
Spoilers: none
Warnings: het sex, mentions of mansex/threesome
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 6,003
Prompts: Ishida, Orihime, Renji, sex
Written for: RenIshiHime Challenge over at 

Comments

[2metaldog]

I'm glad I could help and you were very easy to work with. I also really liked what you did with the story and I hope you get lots of votes for it.

[annieroo2]

Oh Thank you so much!! I really couldn't have done this without you.

I did get a bunch of votes which was really nice, especially considering my take on the prompt was quite a bit different than most everyone else's. I even got enough votes for a prize. No clue what it will be yet, though.

The really cool part though was to have people that had never read anything by me, read this and actually like it.

Thanks again for everything!! Especially the ass kicking tweaking of the dialog and the help bringing out the right emotions during the sex.

You seriously rock woman!

[2metaldog]

*blushes* You had the bones. You just needed some help to flesh it out a little.

Congrats on winning a prize!

[annieroo2]

But you provided the help I desperately needed to see my flaws. Without that I would have been too embarrassed to post it.

So thanks!

[serenity2425]

OMG, I love this! You did an awesome job with Orihime and Ishida. I loved it when Orihime is explaining her fantasies to Ishida, and he can't follow her 'logic.' lol Great stuff! It was sexy and funny at the same time. Also, I can tell your writing is improving. The whole story flowed really well and I felt the emotion of the characters. I thought you made some really good word choices

[annieroo2]

OMG! I love you!! This was such an awesome review