Comments | annieroo2: FIC - Miscalculation ~Urahara, Yoruichi ~PG

annieroo2

FIC - Miscalculation ~Urahara, Yoruichi ~PG

Oct 17, 2008 22:27

Title: Miscalculation
Pairings/Characters: Urahara Kisuke, Shihōin Yoruichi
Spoilers: none
Warnings: crack
Rating: PG
Word Count: 251
Word Limit: 300
Prompt: mathematical
Written for: week #33 bleach_contest
Description: Why is Yoruichi a cat?
Beta: yawns_widely

( If I'd done the math right... )

yoruichi, contest-entry, bleach, urahara, fanfic

Comments 14

marinliliz October 18 2008, 05:53:52 UTC

LOL♥♥♥

This is great, what an adorable idea. Miscalculations that turn you into a cat.*grins widely* I wonder into what the original calculation was supposed to result.

annieroo2 October 20 2008, 13:43:22 UTC

Oh you have no idea how many things I went through trying to decide what experiment Urahara was running before it went wrong. In the end I figured out I wasn't going to have enough words to do to explain it anyway.

So I just kept it to the meat of the story and left the rest up to reader imagination. ;)

I'm so happy you liked the story and got a good laugh out of it. Thanks for reading and commenting. :D

moogledaime October 18 2008, 07:33:06 UTC

（＞∀＜） LOL!

But it's super cool, Urahara!

annieroo2 October 20 2008, 13:46:08 UTC

Yeah, and we know how much Yoruichi likes being a cat, I know she'd love scare factor of being that big and fierce. :D

It's great that you got a laugh out of my story. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment. :)

bloodthirstylt October 18 2008, 20:29:20 UTC

Love this. That is so so so Urahara *grins*

annieroo2 October 20 2008, 13:37:56 UTC

Thank you! It's always gratifying to know when I get a character right. :D

fine_lights October 18 2008, 22:22:12 UTC

*L* Behind this 250-word story I sense a 250,000-word epic explaining everything Kisuke had to do to make it up to her. How typical of him to make a mistake and then spin it to his advantage. Would be interesting to hear this from Yoruichi's perspective!

annieroo2 October 20 2008, 13:49:38 UTC

250,000 might not be enough words to make up for that big a mistake. Still, I think Yoruichi was probably excited by the change in the long run. :D

Glad you got a good laugh! Thanks for reading and commenting, it's greatly appreciated. :)

vayshti October 19 2008, 00:11:33 UTC

Yes! Another gorgeous zanpakutou fic.

This one is lovingly light-hearted, and I'm completely sold on the back story you convincingly hint at.

But for me the biggest thing is the hint of Urahara making mistakes - we, the audience get to hear his admission, but the rest of the Bleach world does not. It fits utterly with his character that he has this air of authority, intelligence, but humility at the same time... humility because he knows how much of his success is luck or chance...

annieroo2 October 20 2008, 14:05:35 UTC

Well, I don't know about that, but it was fun to imagine.

I do think it's hysterical that you seem to pull out even the tiniest ideas I was trying to stick into a story. Of course we know some of the biggest mistakes Urahara makes when he's centuries old, I figured it had to start somewhere. If he doesn't have any compunction about experimenting on people after a century, he certainly wouldn't have seen anything wrong with it as a teenager.

As for his humility, I kind of got that from his whole apology speech to Ichigo when they returned from Soul Society and also his guilt over the Vaizard. Of course we don't know if he truly feels what he's saying, but I like to think he does. :D

Thanks so much for reading and as always thanks for making me feel less insane by understanding my prose. :D