Comments | annieroo2: FIC - Bankai Baby ~Urahara, Benihime PG

annieroo2

FIC - Bankai Baby ~Urahara, Benihime PG

Jul 17, 2008 20:47

Title: Bankai Baby
Pairings/Characters: Urahara Kisuke and Benihime
Spoilers: none
Warnings: mild violence
Rating: PG
Word Count: 299
Word Limit: 300
Prompt: sultry
Written for: week #27 bleach_contest
Description: Kisuke thrust his zanpakutō into the tenshintai to compel Benihime to materialize.

( Kisuke thrust his zanpakuto... )

contest-entry, bleach, urahara, benihime, fanfic

Comments 23

fine_lights July 19 2008, 05:23:26 UTC

Oooh. Yeah, I imagine she'd be irritated with him for using a shortcut! "Beautiful and terrible" is a nice combination for Benihime.

annieroo2 July 20 2008, 00:26:25 UTC

Hehehe! I love that description. It was much more succinct that mine. ;)

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment on my story. I greatly appreciate your time. :D

bloodthirstylt September 27 2008, 02:58:46 UTC

*glomps* this was fantastic. I love your Benahime! she is scarily hot.

annieroo2 September 27 2008, 15:48:19 UTC

*hugs* Thanks hun!! I'm so glad you liked her. I wanted so badly to see Urahara's bankai and Benihime materialize. I just hope we get to someday! :D

It's so good to see you here on LJ. I really need to get some more of my boys love stories posted on y!gal, but I've been so swamped lately.

Thanks for venturing over here to read some of my stuff. I really appreciate it! D

bloodthirstylt September 27 2008, 20:19:01 UTC

I love your writing. Of course I would read it. *grins*

annieroo2 September 29 2008, 03:11:00 UTC

What a lovely thing to say. Thank you so much! *hugs*

Thread 5

wintaerland October 16 2008, 03:37:49 UTC

Loved it!
Oddly enough, the general take on Benihime is that she's a beautifully cruel/cold zanpakutou. Then again, I've only read two Benihime fics...

This inspires me to write an Urahara/Benihime drabble, but I need to work on my Urahara/OC fic >_<

Anyways, nice job! I especially liked your description of her clothing, seems to really fit her

annieroo2 October 17 2008, 01:51:44 UTC

I think a lot of people look at the fact that Benihime uses a blood mist as a shield and attack, to get a feel for her. Since we really don't know anything else, to me that screams cold and calculating, hence my views.

The fandom can always use other views on her though, so you should go with your inspiration while continuing your work in progress.

I am so happy you loved it! It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy. Her clothes were a blast to design even though I am horribly fashion challenged. :D

Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave comments. :)