We'll just say this is fashionably late, all right?

Jun 14, 2011 22:49

 Untitled COMMENT-FIC for the most excellent Running hot meme held by the very considerate ariadnes_string 
FANDOM: White Collar
RATING: PG (GEN)
WORDCOUNT: - 2000
CHARACTERS: Neal, Peter
NOTES: for embroiderama and the prompt "passing out from fever". This is almost certainly not what she had in mind... there's nearly no angst, for starters, and it appears to be more of a crack! ( Read more... )

fan fic, white collar is for threesomes

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tj_teejay June 14 2011, 21:02:15 UTC
LOL! That was excellent. Gave me a good chuckle! I'll definitely put this in my "Memories". :-D

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anniehow June 14 2011, 21:09:49 UTC
I aim for chuckles!

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ariadnes_string June 14 2011, 23:08:44 UTC
Yay! still love this! Neal's faith in his own smooth-talking ability is pretty endearing :)

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anniehow June 18 2011, 20:23:41 UTC
Thank you! Now with bonus proper author notes!

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embroiderama June 14 2011, 23:17:05 UTC
Hah, poor Neal! This is adorable, thank you for writing my prompt!

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anniehow June 18 2011, 20:24:05 UTC
Thank you for prompting! Sorry it took so long...

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rabidchild June 15 2011, 02:20:56 UTC
This is...it's...

I'm kinda speechless, and i can't put into words how wonderful this was. So enjoyable. I loved Neal's whole attitude here, and the way you have him feeling like he's invincible,. even when he's flat out on the floor. Well done!

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anniehow June 18 2011, 20:24:34 UTC
Woah, glad you liked it!

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neontiger55 June 19 2011, 10:15:02 UTC
I think this is just about perfect, from Neal's complete obliviousness of the entire situation to Peter's amused/disgruntled reaction and the epilogue. well written, Loved it :)

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anniehow June 19 2011, 10:19:02 UTC
Thanks, glad you enjoyed!

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