Genetic

[annicadragonfly]

Fandom: Young Justice
Characters: Artemis Crock, Paula Crock, Wally West
Rating: T
Summary: The second worst thing in the world is seeing your mother cry. The worst thing, being the one who made her cry
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters or the fandom

The only things I can think as I’m led to my front door is 1) the fact that the hand

Comments

[thecivilunrest]

All righty, so, sorry this review is kind of late but honestly I've actually been busy (le gasp) and stuff so yeah. Sorry. I try to keep on top of these things but I fail.

Anyway, moving on.

This is really good! I just... okay your first person is gold, your sentence flow is awesome, and I love the characterization. I also really liked the way that you described Wally (freckly back, yum!).

I especially loved that part where Artemis wished that she could have stayed with Wally in that moment in the desert forever. It just felt really genuine and totally brought out my shipper's heart.

And I love their little 'moment' and how the two of them played off each other.

Also so Artemis and her mom's relationship is seriously one of my favorite relationships in the show and I like how you portrayed it here, because, well, I just do.

This is lovely, well done. (:

[annicadragonfly]

Lol - it's totally cool

Thank you! (and lol - I hate it when people don't add that detail in, so I had to, 'cause he is freckly)

N'aww! I'm glad you liked that part, I was hoping a lot of people would XD

That moment was actually HARD, 'cause I kinda wanted them to feel sort of awkward towards each other but not like "OMG I really like him" crushiness (lolol is that a word?) but I'm happy with how it turned out :D

I love their relationship too

Thank you bubby! <3