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annepackrat

Fanfic: What Makes A Man - Part II

Apr 21, 2011 16:21

Part I Be Here!

( 'Oh god!' Ed said between tears, 'You look ridiculous! You look like someone took a Mustang doll and drew boobs on it!' )

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annepackrat April 22 2011, 01:51:38 UTC

I'll check it out. So far Marshes of Sleep is my favorite SE author.

jellyjay April 22 2011, 05:55:37 UTC

AWESOME. That is all. Certainly brightened my Friday :D

bay115 June 12 2011, 20:15:12 UTC

Haha, I really like this a lot! I usually don't go for gender-bending stories, but I'm curious about this and have to say I enjoyed this a lot. Roy and Riza's bickering over their new sex change are fun to read and the suspense plot here is nicely done too. The epilogue is very nice too LOL over Roy's reaction over him being the one giving birth. Great work!

Sorry if you didn't expect a late reply here. I have been reading a few FMA Big Bang fics lately and it's taking me a while to write up the comments, haha.

annepackrat June 13 2011, 18:11:40 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I tried to make this different then most gender-bending fics; so many seem to change the characters drastically in personality when they make the sex change. My take is that beyond the physical differences and some minor effects of hormones, the characters are essentially the same people they were. As Riza says at the end, "It doesn't matter if you're a man or woman, you're still Roy Mustang."