Comments | annepackrat: FMA Fanfic - Like Father, Like Daughter

annepackrat

FMA Fanfic - Like Father, Like Daughter - PG

Jul 07, 2008 01:20

Title: Like Father, Like Daughter
Series: Not Quite Happily Ever After, but can be read independently of any of the others in the series.
Author: annepackrat
Warnings: Set post-movie. Contains minor manga spoilers for Riza's past. This story contains Royai, Roy / Riza.
Genre: Humor / Family
Disclaimer: FMA is created by Hiromu Arakawa and is distributed by ( Read more... )

pg, not quite happily ever after, royai, roy/riza, fanfic, fma

Comments 16

dreamer1789 July 7 2008, 08:23:56 UTC

XD I like Armstrong even more now.

"And, and he tore off his shirt too, but he said I don't have to do that part cause I'm a girl." LOL! He would say that.

Cute kid, I really like how you draw a parallel between her and Roy. Your character dynamics in general are sweet. ^^

annepackrat July 7 2008, 17:03:29 UTC

Thank you. Heh, yeah, with four sisters, Armstrong has to be sensitive to that kind of thing. Plus there's also his gentle nature.

isha_libran July 7 2008, 09:41:50 UTC

I was 'aw'-ing all throughout, but then this line made me giggle like a loon: Nicole grinned in triumph at her father and mother. "I almost forgot the speech! The sparkly-man said the speech is the most important part!"

Hee. Armstrong would say that, wouldn't he? XD

Thanks for sahring this! =)

annepackrat July 7 2008, 17:05:19 UTC

"What ho, daughter of the Flame Alchemist! The speech is the passion that powers the might behind alchemy! Therefore, it is vital that it is delivered swiftly in order to fully complete the alchemical process!"

isha_libran July 7 2008, 18:09:00 UTC

evil_little_dog July 7 2008, 13:35:01 UTC

*DIES* at the "Speech is the most important part!"

Absolutely delightful.

annepackrat July 7 2008, 17:06:54 UTC

I'm still waiting for Olivia Armstrong to deliver a speech. Really, I want to see her do that.

evil_little_dog July 7 2008, 22:42:24 UTC

With...vibrant red sparklies. *nod*

annepackrat July 7 2008, 22:46:48 UTC

Hehe. "I'll have you know, Mustang, that this sword technique was passed down through generations of the Armstrong family."

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sapphyre_kikyo July 7 2008, 14:31:40 UTC

Hehehe. This was super cute! I'm not a Royai fan, but this was too cute.

annepackrat July 7 2008, 17:06:09 UTC

Yeah, a lot of my stuff isn't too heavy-handed on the Royai, but is more on the humor side.

live4him4eva July 7 2008, 21:21:30 UTC

I loved it! ;-; I can't help but melt at any and all Royai-with-children stories. xD Though neither character seems like it at first, you can totally tell they'd make great parents. (Especially Hawkeye.) Roy isn't as great with children, but I would bet he'd be great once he had one of his own.

(And the Armstrong thing, pure awesome. Totally true. xD)