dream_holiday exchange fic

[anne_jumps]

For: hazelwine
Title: Sometimes I Wanna Keep You Warm
Pairing: Arthur/Eames
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 7,054
Warnings: Barebacking, rimming.
Summary: "We really ought to make the most of being snowed in together, you know," Eames said, leaning in, voice husky.
Author's Notes: hazelwine requested a snowy winter setting with a smattering of preferences and kinks.

Comments

[sneaqui]

HOLY. HELL. This is damn near PERFECT for me. So romantic while still being in character. And the sex was absurdly hot and detailed without reading like an instruction manual.

Damn. I think I'm gonna have to save this to my memories. Amazing.

<3 <3 <3

[anne_jumps]

Thank you so much for this amazing and lovely comment!! I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

[night_reveals]

Guuhh...

Um holy crap, this was so hot. I loved their banter, and the hinted-at history. The drunk kiss they shared sounds SO HOT, too. (I am a sucker for strange things...)

Arthur pretending to be grumpy is also maybe the best thing ever.

YOU WIN. *__*

[anne_jumps]

OMG THANK YOU :D

Yeah, I think it was probably a pretty hot kiss. They'd be all thin and young(er) and wide-eyed with military haircuts and tans, rarrrr. (Did you see Stop-Loss?)

[night_reveals]

I haven't!

Don't tease me; them lean and wiry and tan is just fkdajfd +wibble+

[anne_jumps]

Well, Stop-Loss is a not a very good movie, but Joe looks wicked hot in it.

[anne_jumps]

:D Thank you for looking it over earlier!

[lezzerlee]

Oh my, that was scorching hot. I loved that there was negotiation, banter, instruction, dirty talk, rimming, blowjobs and super hot face to face sex all in one fic!!!

[anne_jumps]

Thank you so much!
I was going to ramble on about how RP influenced how things ended up going, but my sleep aid has kicked in and I don't see that as being a good idea right now....

[recrudescence]

This is a list of things I enjoyed about this fic, by no means exhaustive: Eames's secret nickname for Arthur, Arthur as an ex-Marine, the snuggle-close-to-the-warmth-of-my-dick trope, implications of imminent daddy kink (!!!), GUN OIL, and cuddling, always cuddling (even if it's grumpy).

[anne_jumps]

Thank you! I'll have to respond more in-depth when I get home from work, as I am running late...!

I'm a Marine's daughter and IDK, I just really want Arthur to have been a Marine. While I think the dreamshare program sounds like an Army thing, there's no reason they couldn't also recruit from the Marines. There is the bit in canon where Arthur refers to the program 'participants' as "soldiers," which is a term most Marines wouldn't use for Marines, but it works if you assume the program had both soldiers and Marines and Arthur just called them all soldiers because he's tired of Cobb squinting at him when he tries to get picky and detailed...? Anyway maybe I shouldn't cling to the Marines thing but dammit, why would Arthur join the Army when he could join the Marines?

The imminent daddy!kink: I am certain Eames didn't forget about that and made sure to bring it up again. Mmmhmm.