Twist of Fate: Chapter 11

Apr 26, 2007 07:12

Title: A Twist of Fate
Ratings/Warnings: mentions of abuse
Beta: The truly awesome and patient loracj2
Disclaimers: I own nothing in relation to The O.C. All mistakes are mine. Also, I know very little about the laws of California. Any reference to anything legal is purely the made up fiction of the author’s little mind. Also, in a previous chapter I said ( Read more... )

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smc36 April 26 2007, 12:37:57 UTC
Ok - so this is a ggod thing, right?
Sandy knows all about Art and is thus going to help him, right?
We're not going to find Ryan in a gutter, right?
Huh? Right??

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anne35 April 27 2007, 01:38:46 UTC
Weeeelllll...it's kind of a good thing. I mean it certainly can't hurt. Sandy's going to try and help him. However, I will say that this story has at least five more chapters and an epilogue. So that is kind of a hint/indication that the information won't do Sandy or Ryan any good right away.
We're not going to find Ryan in a gutter, right?
NEVER!!!! I could never kill Ryan. But I haven't figured out what to do with Art at the end of the story...finding him in a gutter may be a proper ending for him.

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brandywine421 April 26 2007, 12:44:00 UTC
Oh So Great.

Love this.

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anne35 April 27 2007, 01:40:30 UTC
Thanks, brandy. I really appreciate you letting me know that you're enjoying this story.
On a different note, I must say that you completely spoiled me over the past few days. I was so disappointed not to see you update your latest and greatest. You know "if you give a mouse a cookie..."

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fifimom April 26 2007, 13:40:50 UTC
Poor Ryan, how has he managed to survive? I'd hope Sandy has to opportunity to punch the shit out of Art and I hope he takes it.

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anne35 April 27 2007, 01:42:01 UTC
Our Ryan is quite the survivor, isn't he?
I'm afraid Sandy will probably not get the opportunity to punch Art's lights out, but I will try my best to make sure he gets what he deserves in the end.

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brassebouillon April 26 2007, 14:13:51 UTC
You totally made my day (and it was really awful)! I really like this update. I've missed Ryan, Seth and Kirsten for sure, but such an update was necessary and interesting because we've learnt a lot about Ryan and his past. And I'm so glad Sandy is totally determined to help Ryan (I mean, he was before, but now, he's not going to let Ryan live back to that psycho Art).
One consequence of your fanfic : I use to like the name 'Arthur'. I don't anymore!!
Thanks again for the great update!
I'm so looking forward to read the next chapter!

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anne35 April 27 2007, 01:46:43 UTC
I'm sorry about ruining the name Arthur for you.
Next chapter there will be very little Sandy, but a whole lot of Ryan and Kirsten, with bit of Seth thrown it at the last. I'm glad you thought it was a necessary addition to the story. I do tend ramble and I'm glad the readers think that this story is moving along.

p.s. My free computer time this weekend will be devoted to looking over your latest chapter.

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brassebouillon April 27 2007, 13:45:13 UTC
Next chapter sounds so great!! And I'm so looking forwards chapter 13 (Think so, if I've read correctly the comments and your replies) where the Cohen are going to discover Ryan's back's injuries.
The story is definitely moving along, it's really a great one!
Thanks for betaing ABNL!

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anonymous April 26 2007, 14:41:42 UTC
Ohhh.. I have waited for you to post a new chapter for so long.. I'm so happy it's here. =) *giggelslikealony*
Thanks. Of to reading it now.
SB

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anne35 April 27 2007, 01:48:54 UTC
Now I feel guilty that this chapter was so short. My life has finally settled down a bit and hopefully that means I will be able to have quicker updates than I have the past few months. I have a good start on the next chapter, so we'll see.

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scrapperbilly April 29 2007, 22:10:52 UTC
I just got the time to comment on this chapter, and I got to say..
Jippi! Hipp HURRA! super duper!
Don't feel guilty, it's just great that it's her.
You are one of my favorite authors.
I'm looking forward t your updates.
SB

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anne35 May 2 2007, 19:26:41 UTC
Thank you. That's very kind of you.

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