Your Devils and Your Deeds: Chapter 2

[annayesmaam]

Title: "Your Devils and Your Deeds"
Chapter: 2/10
Author: Anna-Yes-Ma'am
Rating: Hard R (Language, sexual content)
Summary: A view of the finale that Ted Mosby didn't see and couldn't see, no matter how much the writing was on the wall. Spanning decades and continents, their story was never perfect and they were never perfect, but they were always

Comments

[keve41182]

This is incredibly well-written. Looking forward to more!

[filleencore]

I need this story like I need air in my lungs. Why is it so good?

The 2014!flashback was amazing, but it made me so sad for them. Knowing that they're happy and having fun together and knowing of what's to come breaks my heart. Ah!

And I thought he was meeting her in Toronto in the 2017!flashforward 'cause what else would Barney be doing in Canada, right? Duh me! I really like the turn his career has taken though and that the only person he'd fess up to about his failure is her. If this ain't love...

This goes right in with my theory that Ted doesn't know, can't possibly know, whatever the heck was/is/will be (what tense should I use? Don't know how to place this in time anymore lol) going on with Robin and I cannot wait to read more, even though I'm scared half to death of what is to come. This has me on the edge of my seat, my heart pounding in my chest. :) I just want them to get back together already. I need more!!! Gimme more. Please? :)

[darlulu]

I'm loving this so much even though it definitely breaks my heart at times. I'm really hoping Barney and Robin find some much-deserved sustained happiness by the end of your tale.

[unzadi]

Oh mercy, I love this fic. Love 2017 Barney as a failed lifestyle guru, love the so close but so far of their phone conversation, and the way all the timelines weave together. Love it. Love it. Love it.

[buffaloryan]

An AWESOME chapter, cannot wait for the next one. I'm telling you, it's a mini series in the making.