Comments | annalazarus: Dean/OFC fic: Rope on Fire, NC-17

annalazarus

Dean/OFC fic: Rope on Fire, NC-17

Feb 04, 2008 14:32

Title: Rope on Fire
Author: annalazarus
Pairing: Dean/OFC
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Summary: Dean is 19 and thinks he knows everything there is to know about sex. He's wrong.
Notes: for cunnilingusfic, based on onelittlesleep's prompt: A girl touching at Dean's mouth and talking dirty. Telling him she wants that. But Dean's never. DONE THAT. Awkward, desperate refusal. And then slow ( Read more... )

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simplysonia February 4 2008, 20:16:04 UTC

She looked sleepy, and Dean hoped to god she wasn't about to pass out on him. He silently swore to himself that he'd never, ever do that to a girl again before getting her off.
This is one of those lines I'm going to remember for the rest of my life. So freakin' classic.

IF I can manage to get my head to stop swimming, I'll do my best to come back and leave REAL feedback. But if I don't, know that this was EXTREMELY satisfying. It's nice to read Dean as a learner, and you handled it well. And his enthusiasm once he gets started ... *bites fist* Plus he ended up enjoying it so much, gives me terrible thoughts about him growing up into someone who can't get enough of THAT and Oh LORD ...

Great job on this.

annalazarus February 5 2008, 18:02:26 UTC

Thanks for the lovely feedback! It was tricky to write a less-confident Dean, so I'm happy that it worked for you.

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annalazarus February 5 2008, 18:03:51 UTC

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it.

thenyxie February 4 2008, 20:39:03 UTC

Mmm. Yes! So hot, and just that little bit awkward to make it perfect. I don't blame her. Who hasn't had a thought about those lips? I wonder if Dean even has any idea yet at this age how many women are already looking at him like that? *G*

This was awesome! Thanks :)

annalazarus February 5 2008, 18:05:10 UTC

I always like writing in a bit of awkwardness--I feel like it makes the eventual awesomeness that much better. :-) I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

poisontaster February 4 2008, 21:06:42 UTC

*sighs happily* Dean the novice getting taught by older women is SUCH A HAPPY PLACE. Delicious.

annalazarus February 5 2008, 18:05:54 UTC

Seriously. I read Heidi's prompt, and my eyes glazed over with all the lovely possibilities. Nnnggh.

kelly_girl February 4 2008, 21:09:08 UTC

That was hot and very satisfying. Makes sense that Dean had to learn how to do it at some point. Loved the woman being insistent and talking Dean into it.

annalazarus February 5 2008, 18:06:51 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.