And now for something completely the same...

[annakovsky]

Well, I haven't been responding to comments 'cause I've been writing more. May I present part 12 of "A Critique of Pure Reason"?

As usual, unbeta'd, un-thought-through, etc.

Previous parts are here.

Comments

[nwhepcat]

Fantastic visceral detail. You sell every single sensation he's feeling.

Get that boy to a doctor!

[annakovsky]

Thanks so much!

And seriously. One trip to the emergency room, coming up.

[annakovsky]

Hee! That's an interesting fic preference. Human biology. Huh.

This isn't the sexiest of bodily fluids, but glad it makes you happy anyway. :-)

[myriad69]

MAHHHHH!!! I was heading out the door when I decided to check my flist one. last. time. and THIS was here!! ::loves all over you::

And dammit, I can feel Dom's pain!! Stop writing so clearly! No, really don't, but MAHHHH!!!

Wow, I really wish my feedback was a little more intelligent than this. Huh.

[annakovsky]

Hee! Oh, I'm good with this kind of feedback too. :-)

[witling]

Dear God. Poor Dom! And good, steady Xander. My boyfriend.

I hope they have a Pepsi in that Shell station. Looks like Dom could use one.

[annakovsky]

Everyone should have a Xander, really. Maybe two. And by everyone, I mean us.

And also a Pepsi. Mmmm, Pepsi.

[darling_effect]

I have so much catching up to do on this! ::scurries off to your Memories::
Just popping in to say how much I love your icon, really! ::loves on The Royal Tenenbaums::

[annakovsky]

Ooh, your icon too! Royal Tenenbaums is sooooo the best movie eva.