Fic: No more than a stone in a pasture full of stones (Elliot/Olivia, PG)

May 02, 2006 13:04

Title: No more than a stone in a pasture full of stones
Fandom: Law & Order: SVU
Pairing: Elliot/Olivia
Rating: PG
Length: 2500 words.
Summary: Post-Fault. That's probably all you need to know. If you haven't seen Fault, download it (it's SVU0719).

If you couldn't be a sex crimes detective, what would you be?

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olivia benson, fanfic: svu, fanfiction, law & order: svu, elliot stabler, het, elliot/olivia

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hippydippymama May 2 2006, 10:34:53 UTC
That. Was AWESOME.

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annakovsky May 2 2006, 11:13:58 UTC
Thanks so much!

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scullyseviltwin May 2 2006, 12:57:59 UTC
I just wanted to say... HOLY CRAP LOVE YOUR ICON!!!

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moireach May 2 2006, 10:37:05 UTC
Oh man, how do you do it every time? This is so sad and so full of wanting and all the details give it so much. The end made me go all ;siadjf;aoidjs

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moireach May 2 2006, 10:43:22 UTC
(And how it's a wanting that's so nameless and unfocused and just. Everyday. Which makes it so much realer.)

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annakovsky May 2 2006, 11:16:45 UTC
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Thank you! Writing the ending made me tear my hair out so I'm really glad you liked it. Ha.

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moireach May 2 2006, 11:19:08 UTC
Man, I know you'd said you were having trouble with the ending but I totally don't believe it because that's the best part. "Enough." Twice. And he kisses the way she thought he would.

::clutches heart::

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amerella May 2 2006, 10:42:38 UTC
I adore the way you write. The best thing about this is the way in which it builds in intensity, so perfectly slowly.

Maybe my favourite line:

In the picture she doesn't look as rattled as she remembers being.

Very nice.

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annakovsky May 2 2006, 11:17:08 UTC
Oh, thank you! I'm really glad you liked.

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copernica3 May 2 2006, 11:28:25 UTC
Huh. I like it. It's quiet, somehow. Tense, but if feels inevitable at the same time.

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annakovsky May 2 2006, 11:33:29 UTC
Thanks!

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annakovsky May 2 2006, 11:43:18 UTC
Thanks so much!

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